Advent of the New Age - Reviews

Omg I love this.

It kinda sound's like the authors rambling on in the first 5 or so chapters. like they don't have a clear picture or understanding of what's they're writing. Overall the concept and ideas are there but I think they could've been developed further.

After reading a few chapters of the book, I decided to put the book down. My main criticism is that the writing style feels slightly elementary. There are times when the past and present tenses are used right after each other in the same paragraph which takes away from the story’s emersion. Also, I personally didnt like how the main character seems slightly one dimensional. I havent read far, but the character doesn’t seem to have any substance. However, I would still give the story a chance, because you may like it.

I am currently enjoying the story, but i hope the author will write longer chapters.                                                                  

Lilly goes to workout but her concentration was disturbed as she was thinking about Riya. she couldn't help herself and calls Riya again.  It is almost 7 in the morning, This time Riya picks up the call.

Seeing only five minutes left on the proverbial clock, he took up post on top of a near by hardwood.

"Woah I really went out that cool." ALIBABA SAID LOL

Ah, right, he was an unexpected person, how about give him a joke that he would not have expected and I was sure that would make him laugh.

good, like this is way too good oh and this  is an honest review i am not a bot you can check my profile to confirm it ,this novel has a lot of potential believe IT writing quality is peak, that is  it's at the level of most popular novels out there story development is great each ch up till now was really fun and necessary so author isn't extending it nor is he going to fast i don't know how to rate character designs but i guess it should be okay especially in world background cause the whole world and it's power system is very  unique or at least i have never seen this before at the beginning it feels a bit like shadow slave but after entering the trials it's completely different with some minor similarities that don't change my opinion of the story and i believe it's a great novelthe power system is really interesting

I've really enjoyed reading this story over the last few months. I'm currently at chapter 55 and I'm interested to see where it goes from here! Mc has a hard start, which I think makes for some interesting character development!

I had enough patience until chapter 20. It's bad. You can call it "chaos" in one word. The narrative jumps, often ending in nothing. Dumb dialogues between the main character and the system, I don't even know which one is dumber. In general, chaos, chaos, chaos.

the story is really good, i do have to admit that the writing quality is not the best but and the characters are not described well but other than that, i love it so much.