Across Time and Space - Reviews

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I can’t wait for the next chapter I realy like the story even though there is a similar story in the begging but I forgot what story it was bt anyway I love the plot and I AM ROOTING FOR RIOxRIA can’t wait for the story to develope more

i really want this book i love this to read

Niriana looked at her, surprised. Right...Now I remember, she had thought. "Oh. Um, Sure. My name is Niriana. What about y-" The girls brother would walk in. "Hey, S- Oh, You are awake! Do you need something?-Oh sorry...I am Zakiretu. This is my younger sister, Sakirenetta. You can call me Zaki for short." He would smile, softly. His face was chisled and looked nothing like his younger sisters.

Thomas: tama ka,kasalanan rin namin to ni elsa dahil masyado namin siyang inispoiled,napaka swerte ni xenon sa inyo dahil pinalaki niyo siya ng mabait,mabuting tao.

After parking the car they went to the doorway of the club.

"This elder demands to know who is in charge!" It was an older woman's voice booming from the figure on the sword. Likely someone who was of higher stature than the cultivator standing beside him. Maybe it was an Elder from another Sect?

Why is it like this ?

Silver Knight Alrose.

"Geeez, your not fun Funkai-san"

Only 14 chapters so far and we are still being introduced to the MC to what makes him, Well "him". Pacing is good, motives are somewhat clear but how can know 'everything' about another even our MC. This leaves things open for amazing, and maybe sometimes, stupid actions instead of a cookie cutter hero/anti-hero type. Give it a read to see if you agree or not.

I’m loving the story so far its interesting and well written. I hope this is going to be a long one very much looking foward to new chapters