ACE OF FATE - Reviews

eagerly waiting for Harry's story

This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.

To say the truth i was thinking that novel is like the other ones with villains, but no, and that really surprised me, the history is simple but it's good.Ps: I know it's a cliche, but i want him with Alina too.

Waiting for an update.........................................................................................................................................

needs more detail in his inventions he makes. you keep doing he Or she it's confusing. your charging coins for small chapters ?

Oh this work is so interesting, funny and action packed! You have to love it when characters based on their mythological and historical counterparts act out. And then there is the Male Lead a Supreme Elementalist who uses powers of Elements of Periodic Table, apart from Orthodox elements like Fire. The War with the Imperial Alliance happens in chapter 7 where the true Action starts. It was amazing! A must read for all.

The writing is lazy, hard to understand English. And a lot of dumb situations, for example: Oh no! I've encountered a problem x, no worries though I'll pull the solution y out of my a**.

"how are you feeling"?he asked me

The newly arrived woman paid Kaguya absolutely no mind as she sat down, her attention fixed on the viceroy. Kaguya on the other hand studied her carefully albeit discretely. The eagles on her collar indicated she was a full colonel, not just a lieutenant-colonel but it was the red shield on the woman's armband that really caught Kaguya's attention. The red shield of Eir, the Valkyrie of healing. Colonel Frasier was a member of the Britannian Army Nursing Corps, not a member of the regular Britannian forces.

"There must be something happening outside"

Once all was settled, ratley  made his man  take turns guarding the camp

I've read to chapter 2 and I'm completely hooked. I love the dynamic between Camila and Alya.... I'll definitely keep reading