A V.A.M.P.'S I.R.E. - Reviews

Dropped at Chapter 133.The novel has an amazing start, with the author making good use of many cliches and ideas. I can say that I was completely hooked by this novel until the MC and trupe returned to their academy... after that, I felt as if every good part was gone.The MC never tries to learn or do what he needs for that moment, always resulting in "Oh, if only I knew this~" or "If only I prepared myself". His emotional state is a total inconsistency, with him acting like a nervous child in scholar events despite his mental age and maturity displayed in past events, including close-ins with death.He is a total push-over of the plot, if the plot needs this, then it will happen even if the world itself becomes a total joke, full of laziness and retards.The characters are rather interesting, but the author seems to fear putting them in the splot-light so don't expect any kind of great development in less than 100~200 chapters.The world is... what I can say, extremely vague and messed. We have the factions and the mortals (common humans), but despite having numerous chance of gathering more information that would save their lives, they focus their times on the things forced by the plot.In resume, an excellent story with a very interesting beginning, but that wasn't properly developed, resulting in the plot being forced time and time again.

the story is good and the world-building, the only bad thing is, of course, how short is..............................................................

This is the first time I'm reading a story of this genre and trust me, it is way captivating more than what I imagined. I love your writing style , author. The story outline is really magical and unique. keep it up author.

- I am fine- I responded as I look both scientist in the floor and the boy with blood on his mouth and hands.

Old man Gu looked at the contents and his face paled. His eyes showed some hesitation when suddenly he saw Bai Heng immediately swing the sword towards him:

Goku:we are at the tournament of power

Delilah slowly held her hand over Zeke's body and tried using her ability, however, nothing happened. Her face crumpled as she tried again, but there was still no response from her ability. She quickly held Zeke's wrist to check his pulse, however, it was extremely cold and lifeless. One second, five seconds, ten seconds, half a minute, one minute. No heartbeat. She immediately started performing emergency CPR by pressing on his chest.

I really love this novel, it's easily addictive the storyline, characters , background ,description , climax ,writing style of the author and the imagination of the author are very good. I just love it.

"Hermione! Your Mom's watching!" Harold whispered.

Ilalang roh (level 5) (langka)

I was startled to hear her words, what else could see want besides vengeance.

        As i turned, all i could see was a tall  handsome man with his jet black hair gelled back in a black suit walking towards my direction. His eyes were as brown as hot chocolate. And his lips, looking very soft and with a slight pink flush on his bottom lip. He stopped just one meter in front of me, with his head straight and his eyes looking down on me. It was like he was waiting for me to do something, I was confused on what he wanted me to do. Cole whispered to me and told me to bow down and greet him good morning.