A Time Where I Travel, In Time - Reviews

This book is very interesting. I love it.

Its somewhat reminiscent of Low Dimensional Game except MC seems more human and he has a goal unlike LDG’s MC. Our MC has taken control of a hive of insects that allows him to basically run a miniature version of history.

interesting..............................................................................................................................

This novel is so terrible, I don’t even know where I should start. Some reviews have mentioned the terrible translation. That’s definitely true. However, I don’t think the story would improve much even if Webnovel hired a real translator. Yes, the story is that bad. The pacing is all over the place. Important details are left out that makes the story confusing. It reads like the author has a lot of ideas but doesn’t understand the first thing about writing a story.

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your story line is somewhat ok but the translation, grammar, English is terrible so much so that one cannot know what the story line is about. please improve on the English translation

This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned.A few examples:- Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it- In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER- MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened

Interesting. Nice read, really. The dialogue is cleanly written and feels natural. Not many books nail that. Good job author

the story is promising, reading the story was like a whole roller coaster ride which gave a different vibe and feelings to the person who read the novel, I really like it, I'm hoping for more  chapters 5/5

Hello, shameless author here, I'm not a Chinese so this will be a little different from you typical Xianxia novels. That's all, also give me a review if you happen to like it.

The month went by like a breeze, as Kai trained his knife skills with Jerald at the Raleigh estate. And at the homefront he trained with Oni every night mastering Silent echo and attempting to break into the first levels of Deadly mirage. He also began to work on taijutsu a rare form of hand to hand combat.

"Glad to think you know that I'm a Cherubim. I really thought youre an empty-headed wing-guy." He smiled towards Stevhen who just loosened his gripped. The first guy stumbled upon the other two.