A System that steal the works of authors - Reviews

I could easily understand the story.

There are several types of stories out on Webnovel.  This type is both stupid and extremely reality bending.  System stories that give rewards that include ownership of cars, houses, businesses, ect..., are plain absurd.  In most cases the absurdity ruins the story for me.  Here we start with an absurd MC who is 8, which tells the audience that the story is supposed to be absurd.  Instead of pretending to be a serious modern system story with semi-realistic characters and a bunch of romance and face-slapping, we have it taken from the direction of a spoof.  This is not meant to be taken seriously at all.  It has all the bad modern reward system story methods, but because the MC is an 8y old it changes it from painful to stupid/funny.

Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!

Hahaha after reading this novel, I'm looking at my sister with different eyes This novel is confusing me about the Taboo of Brothers and Mother

Beginning was a bit rough, it seems you are getting better at writing. Less run-ons  and camma errors. I like the charcter ideas, but at the beginning you were going everywhere. Now it seems more solid, I would like to read more.

Wow this story is worth my time!!! ??? This is so good and addicting. The MC is so cool and strong!  Keep up the good work  Mr. Author?????

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Still he supported himself and the family until the elders passed away leaving only him and the daughter.

"Sam, you have a really vicious little buddy stuck in your body a hour ago."

"Oh, so many things I wanna do to him" I thought. "wait no, I can't be thinking of this kind of stuff."

On another side of the island.

"From the moon ashes we born, from the dimension, we came from, as the early creation of yours!"