A Story Told - Reviews

Is it a good idea to put some philosophy with the story?I can edit if you don't like it But it is a good philosophy ^_^  just encourage me

Hi guys, this is Fuji Tatsumaki.I'm going to shamelessly rate myself to somehow promote my new novel.I hope you may enjoy my story.If you have any suggestions and questions, you may inform me in the comments.Thank you guys.