A Love To Unfold (Tagalog) - Reviews

I’ll be honest. I NEED to read this story!! Please vote for this! Please! I’m really interested! Help me.Also. I hope I can make it in to at least 50 chapters without having to pay. That I puke only make my day better.

I'm still in chapter 8, but the story makes me want to continue reading it. The characters development and the MC's perseverance even as a kid is funny and encouraging to see. Please continue the progress of the story to a good development.

Fun and exciting read with an equally fun and exciting protagonist. Zack is entertaining at times as well as being a badass. He's also different in character, and his role within the story is vastly different from what I often see in novels around Webnovel. I appreciate the balance between the text that shows game elements and the story paragraphs. Everything is easy to read. I have yet to see more about the world, but I think there would be more to show in the future. Looking forward to more chapters.

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This is indeed a thriller/ mystery novel. With its morse code puzzles and secret messages, it gives off a vibe of one as our mc, the female reporter, is abandoned after being framed as a murderer.However, I have a few issues:1. I believe I sense several plot holes that could be addressed. Now I may be wrong and not understanding something, but do keep in mind that the reader shouldn’t be mixed up either as it breaks off the immersion. First is to why did the person, who messaged our mc, give a coded message in the computer that pointed to their meeting place ? Was he trying to contact his fellow accomplices on the same computer ? ( this is not quite realistic compared to how clean the murder occurred; makes me think of a novice murderer as he could have used a burner phone in a back alley instead of potentially getting seen by people ) Why don’t both protagonists share this information to the police, or at least to her lawyer ? ( I know it may not be safe, or the criminal could escape, but she should at least be cleared of the charge ! )2. There are some run-on sentences, and I noticed a certain section was repeated in one of the chapters. The only thing I can say is to read and sift through you chapters before and after writing as you might catch major plot holes just by rereading in a reader’s perspective.3. Truth be told, the flow is super fast, and due to the plot holes, it feels a bit lacking. Not that I have anything against a quick plot, but I feel like it needs to be fleshed out more. This is just my personal opinion though.All in all, the intrigue is there, so don’t give up ! You have potential just waiting to be polished. Keep up the good work, Author !

Sage, what a catchy name for a protagonist.Anyway, what a glorious origin. Tragedy strikes, and now the protagonist must struggle to survive. What a great concept.This is an amazing novel. I recommend it.

I am restarting the novel because I realized I could do it better. For example I could've took a little more time to do the introduction of the parents

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She also doesn't like to argue nor compete for a project with her co-workers but the company knows about her talent so she mostly handles a Billion peso contract project or a hundred million peso contract project such as condominium or malls or such which gains a lot of envy from her co-workers who could only have a low-end project.

Although Aizen called the Hollows Arrancar now, to Shirou, they were still the same Hollows he had protected on a barren hill of sand. As such, how could he not understand them?

He thought so these are my current skills. Ok let's give this another shot after struggling for a while with the minions he retreated to a near by tree and said "Summon Undead !!". A number around 100 undead soldiers arrived to fight for their king. He tried to use Shadow Binding but it didn't work it said something about not being able to handle the wait of this shadow. While they took care of the minions he charged at the beast with his scythe in hand slashing first the eyes but this made the beast confused, blind and angry. It started breathing fire everywhere due to his fast reflexes Jin was able to avoid the flame then jumped over this now wall of fire created around it then chopped off both the front legs and the back ones. With this the beast was now immobilized he then walked up to asking "How does it feel to be at the bottom of the food chain, oh great one?". He let out a loud and menacing laugh. He then decapitated it while using devourer so he got a few of its skills including the fire breath now he begon  walking towards the minions and shouted " Your King is dead now BOW!!" After all that he drained all his mana to keep the undead army up an running now he had no mp left. He thought finally I am the one at the top I control my life but before he could bask in the glory he heard a mysterious voice " How unfortunate for you that I just happen to need the skull of a undead such as yourself," but before he could turn around all he could do was watch as his head got closer to the ground. What bad luck indeed he had thought to himself.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running