Some problems in here1. Grammar ( the subject like he, she, him, her)2. Time Skip ( so fast, but the mc power progress not )3. Change POV too much4. Good foreshadow ( or stupid cliffhanger?)The one that speak on opening ceremony, who knows so suddenly MC got Angry and didnt show up on next few chapter5. Stupid Power rankMC can smash new A Rank but cant beat Queen Spider? the one that he fought at 7 years old, and how old he is when she saved Lily? The way he wasting his time without power up with the so called future Right Hand of Demon King and his Memories, well yeah AMAZINGWell author admit too that he want irritate us with his MC and congrats you got it.