The story is not bad, just too bad you went the harem route. You should add the harem tag. I would have skipped this if i had known. For a harem it should be fine. It's just not my kind of book. good luck with the book.
I would commend you for your fast writing skills and uploading skills if you were the original author who actually wrote this novel, sadly instead you became a thief who like to use other peoples work as your own, also known as infringement. -1 rep
"But you are an outsider. Sorry, no offense" she stated. "In a small town like Roseville people are bound to be curious. I'm just asking you up front what is in everyone's mind. So could do an interview with me please?"
