A Being Below None - Reviews

I actually think this story could have been longer. The relationship between James and Ava's dad could have been explained better and certainly the relationship between Ava and her parents could have been explained better. Overall. I liked it

Now the Queen is the one being sulky. Before her son completely leave the playground, he turned back and run to his mother. Seeing her son walks back towards her, the queen in a good mood. "Sorry mother." He then hugs his mother. "I love mother very much."

Motioning to the right, a blonde Kalian woman in scantily clad clothing appeared.