So far the story has been great, only one thing is the problem. Grammar, although the Novel is readable and very enjoyable, some words are added were they don't belong, some are taken away and a few sentences are written in an order that makes it sound bad. It also misses a lot of punctuations but that's really it..Example:"Months ago emperor of thousand sword kingdom, Nathan Jackson was attacked in a distance land. On the same day killers were sent for the loyal supporters of emperor." Although readable it is hard to read since it is missing a few punctuations. That is my only issue, everything else is just great! Love it! Keep it up!
