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60 Delicate Beauty Island Farming
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The characters and story is so far good.
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Novel sounds intersting, but from the review's it seems there is a lot of controvery regarding hte FMC. TBH i feel if the author did not include that part in the story, there would be very little taken away from the story and a whole lot more added in. Right now, myself and many other like minded readers would no doubt find this situation to be unappealing.Anyways, great story, but I can't read further especially with the FMC's situation at the back of my mind. I turly feel this novel could have made it to the top if you didn't have this aspect in your story. Good luck
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I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *), then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
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I love everything From his simple antics with nao and shu to the romance that develops later onFrom the one kick "fights" to )the actual fights against stronger cultivatorsFrom the slight overshadow on the early chapters to the massive world on later onesThe caracter development as well is amazingOnly complaint...It doesn't upload chapters every second
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Love it, the best part for me is the interactions between theo and the chat. if there was one thing i am not liking prob because you only started recently is that there is no development between theo and his ex, i mean 50 odd chapters and she still feels that what she did was right. i need that revenge it just feels so good watching people like her having their life's ruined
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This book is Very Creative, I have read a lot of Video gamebooks but I find this one a little more interesting. Turing the Afterlife into a game is Unique in itself.  The book is well written and has a few unexcepted surprises. What I am most excited about is upcoming enemies Keep Up the Good Work Wild-Bunni
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Amazing! I can't wait to ream the spin-offs and one-shots!! I loved this story so much that I even re-read it!! love you author and can't wait to see what you write next!!!
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Your concept piqued my interest! It's hard writing detective stories so I hope you keep it up!The plot is like any other investigation novels but it's clearly different since the overall vibe of the MC is very different compared to them. I mean, I can't review anything more since there was just one chapter but I hope you continue venturing in this genre :)) Something to watch out for is your lack of article usage. Sometimes it gets confusing which was which if you don't use articles. Also, some of your verbs would be better if you left them on present perfect tenses since it will sound better than present tense, or just use infinitives... or so that's what I think after seeing the whole picture of the first chapter. We authors have a lot of things to improve on phew~! All I know is that this book is going places! Do continue it since I want to read more of these ^ ^
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A unique story. Different from any other book you've ever read. A story of pain, loss, and absolute world domination. Civilization system will blow your mind.
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The bell rang to mark the start of the day. We were receiving new seats because of the new semester. I was seated in the back right seat next to the window. Coincidentally, Uki-chan was seated to my right. She was very happy about the seating arrangement, but I knew that I wouldn't be learning anything in this class after this change. Not that I learned anything before, but being in the top right of classroom means that I'm the main character, well at least in reference to all the anime I've seen. Class started and the teacher was writing some sentences on the board. I was following with the teachers writing, trying to focus on the task at hand but I felt like I was being watched. I turned my head in Uki-chan's direction and saw her staring at me.
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"Come, We will see what is he up to." Matriarch stood and spoke while looking at Li Wei.
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"This is just not fair!" declared Tiny Maggot God, and stomped off into the forest.

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