[BL] Checkmate: side story - Reviews

Original and fantastic story...unusual relationship between detective and killer...the both of them are smart...the characters are not only transmigrators...alive or dead...they have chance go to the new world..everything is connected

Thus far it is an interesting change of pace compared to other VRMMO novels. The MC does not play the same class as he did in the past, but picks a new one he felt had the greatest potential. The author also avoids certain cliches, though not all of them.While this is great for the story, the information on the world itself is rather lacking (but who knows, this is only ch22 so its relatively early in the novel, perhaps that'll change in the future chaps). The one thing that bugs me however is the translation quality. The translators literally copy-pasta'd the First Kill announcement of one boss for another, without changing the boss's name. So even though the MC killed one monster, the announcement was for something else he killed earlier.This just speaks of laziness. Second are all the grammar issues and missing words that leave the occasional sentence in broken English. The translators need to put more effort into the editing process. Period. Edit: After the recent chapter snafu with ch 33 & 34 and the translators not doing a single damn thing to fix it, ontop of the lazy translation, this has earned them 1 star rating. I'd give less if i could.

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I hope you read at least a few chapters before deciding whether you like it or not since the first few are a little bit fast paced and the conversations are not that smooth. I will try to upload at least 5 chapters a week and improve my writing quality every chapter.Each chapter will be around 2000 words

It's just a bunch of airplanes standing side by side. Is it that interesting in his eyes? This guy is too hard to understand.

"That smile was somewhat familiar, it's almost like Katherine's smile but a bit different" Tristan observe Chris and try to connect the dot. 'Hey Christine, I am sorrr....' Tristan stop himself from apologising again while thinking to Chris's word and rephrase his sentence. "Christine, I know this is sudden, but do you have a sibling?"

"Not yet," replied Ibiki in a disappointed tone. "His mental fortitude has proven to be stronger than what we expected. But we are continuing our attempts."

"Sir did you don't want to help Kenji?" asked me. "Just me desu?" Kenji murmured again.

"My wife is a little impatient. I have to leave, since it's our honeymoon night."

        " Saros! I thought you bailed since you hadn't come back from the toilet in so long."

"You know him, Mr. Ferragni?" Raven asked curiously. Tumango naman ang matanda nang nakatingin sa akin. 'Di nagtagal ay nagpakawala siya ng matunog na ngisi.

Only shooting stars