Honestly, this is rather bad. The author just lists events one after another without creating any immersion, the dialogue is the equivalent of two ai conversing as the characters feel more like NPCs, the world-building is ridiculous with stuff like mc gaining the eternal mangekyou sharingan within the first 5 chapters, despite it being unknown to everyone in this world, we don`t know the era or even what the mc is trying to accomplish, and the grammar is not far from MTL in terms of quality, which is quite the achievement. The story has potential, but the author should seriously plan out what they want to write and edit their work.
