"Eternal Dread: The Nether Coin Gamble" - Reviews

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A nice novel for reverend insanity fans ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????

I was intrigued by the premise, but, eh, delivery was kinda weak.It's clear that the author isn't too well versed in English at least in the early chapters. Hopefully writing this helped them get better.The flow is actually pretty good, but the 'conversational' tone the... narrator? takes is mildly annoying. It feels like it's trying to be funny/clever too hard, but ends up awkward.The characters feel a bit artificial, as if they are defined by a trope or cliche that is stuck to their forehead. I'm not saying that you won't find people like them in reality, but they feel like those homeschooled kids that can't read the mood.All in all, it's obvious that it's a beginner work and if you're fine with that then the premise shows a lot of promise. If there's ever a rewritten version of this that cleans things up, I'll give it another shot.

I. LOVE. THIS. BOOK. There are a few grammar mistakes but it's awesome otherwise. YOU ACCUALLY BLEW MY MIND WHEN CHARLY CAME INTO HARRY'S ROOM! AND WHEN LOUIS SAVED HIM! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

"All right, Sun gets to play!"

Later that day

- The reward is 25 FREE extra attributes. So apparently some quests don't give out free attributes. Also, we don't know which attributes players will get upon completion of this quest. Since it's not mentioned if the reward gives out attribute points or random attribute stats.

"Kookie," Rapmon speaks gently and steps into the shower, quietly pulling the shower curtain closed behind him. The scalding water washes over his naked shoulder and he tentatively approaches the maknae. Jungkook is still staring at him, now terrified and confused—because what the hell is Rapmon doing? He should've fled in embarrassment by now! Walking in and seeing him like...like...this! God, Jungkook just wanted to melt into a puddle and wash down the drain. He—

"Buhi~?" Gran tilted his head.

"The pink haired girl is a singer. Her songs was chosen as the most popular songs in many countries. She goes by the stage name Arie." She looks at the man in formal suit before exclaimed in awe." Oh my god! That person in black suit is the CEO of a really big company that just started 10 years ago. He brought his company that he just bought from bankruptcy to the highest peak in the first few months he took over the company!" Her mouth opened "his name is CEO Tao."

He stretched his arm to his side to reach the cabinet for his charger.

"Like I was saying, Vanda, I'm from planet Earth. On it, the most powerful country in the world is the United States of America. That's where I'm from! That country is split into fifty states, and one of them is mostly desert that looks like this."—Havel waved his arm outwards, referring to Helge Desert—"That's Arizona…I think. I've never been there; only seen images."