(Hiatus) Plot Armor Obtain! - Reviews

This is one of the best books I have read in the genre  Fast paced, but without really losing out charater development. The story and world-building are excellent, though world-building is a bit limited for reasons which will become apparent in the story. One of the book’s strength is that it heavily relies on your knowledge of various myths or tropes in order to ‘color in’ the world, but you can easily and blissfully ignore that and just go with the story. The MC is definitely OP, but again, the enemies he has certainly make him work for whatever he accomplishes. Highly recommended :-)

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Synopsis is wrong. He doesn’t have a F rank skill, but a B rank skill and it isn’t upgraded to SSR Rank. world background is similar to real life other than being awakened. Mc character design is garbage, at chapter 4 you might just cheer for the female lead. Ignore tag of high iq, more like entitled mc who already has a pretty decent talent but  asks the system for a higher upgrade. The system is rather unnecessary in this novel as it should have been supplemented that everyone can see their own status in a game like screen. In fact, the mc asks system why he won’t get a higher upgrade, and while translation is terrible, the reason for that is because his body can’t handle it. The reason I say the mc doesn’t have a high IQ because upon exiting a mystic realm (dungeon training instance), he is asked by a man if the mc had gotten a skill drop. The mc replies he had and used it already. This is a huge red flag because now it just sets up the more enemies come because you had something rare trope, which will later invoke my boss’s boss or my brother’s master cliche to fill up the storyAlso the female lead tries to cheer up the mc saying that, “it is not the rank of the talent, but how you use and the effort you put in it”. MC ignores the female lead’s words thinking she’s insulting him. Translation definitely needs to be better as it takes away from the reading experience especially with an entitled mc who thinks that because he has a system and clones, he shouldn’t be working as hard.

You know what's so great about this story? Every named character gets so much development on theeeem! Usually it's only the main character who becomes the focus but here, everyone gets an equal amount of chance to shine. Loyal reader here.

This novel is great until the 5th Volume started.Writing Style: 4/5The author is fluent in English, though occasionally making typos here and there. He has a good writing style, not seeming to break the immersion. My only real problem is the paragraph structure wherein paragraphs get too long.World Background: 4/5Background is great and well thought out. My only surprise is the mention of Mana reservoirs, seemingly unfitting for a life in modern society. There are also some inconsistencies in the world building here and there.Character: 3/5The characters would have been a 4/5 if not for Volume 5. Each character has their own unique personality. Though some like Noah were introduced abruptly, this was at the beginning segments. One character that was special was Luna. She was one of the genuinely interesting characters. She unlike the other girls had a genuine affinity with the MC. Unfortunately, the author decided to separate her in the name of Character Progression, which I disagree with. If not for what the author decided to make her do in Volume 4 and what was evident during Volume 5, I would have rated this a 4 or even a 5.Story: 2/5Same problems with the Characters segment. Vol 1 was consistent while Vol 2 was amazing. The ending was great. Honestly, the story could've ended there with my review on this with 4 for chara, 5 for story and even 5 for world, since inconsistencies started with Vol 4. Unfortunately, the author didn't seem to know that everything wouldn't change with 1 conversation. But it did and now the joy of reading this story is lost.All in all, I'm dropping. The story doesn't have a lot of clichés but because of that, the story gets unnatural in parts where clichés naturally occur. I hope the author learns from this review.

A fun read if you have the time and with the daily upload rate its worth putting into you collection if you have extra time out of the day.Chapters a shorter than the others in the genre though.Still a good read at the end of the day.

[Mission Complete. Rewards being dispensed.]

"Ahhhh~!!! Ahhhhh~!!!" Azusa moaned at the feeling. Shingo lifted up Azusa then slammed her onto the desk so he could thrust her at a better angle. "MMMHAAAA~!!!"

If Nova were here, he would have instantly recognized this lovely lyric and tune.

  Emric turned his attention the the middle table and saw the knight, Garret already sitting and eating his dinner. He wiped his lips and waved motioning both Emric and Saj to come sit by him. Also on Garret's table was a huge tan skinned muscle bound Goliath of a man. He had bright green eyes that radiated violence and mischief. His hair was snow white and tied back into a wild bushy tail that sprouted above his head. He wore a monk like robe that exposed half of his chest and a massive sash of fighting mastery. His cynical gaze locked onto Emric. Emric inspected him and could tell this one was a blood thirsty brawler.

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

He will be a great example by creating his harem                                                 Ddd