(Re-write) House Cazador: The Imperial Lion - Reviews

(Re-write) House Cazador: The Imperial Lion
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Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem..... Great no harem.....
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the way of writing is giving a newbie author. the concept is nice and all but it does not give what supposed to be gave.
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Good story, I hope it's continue.                                                                                                                    
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Nice.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
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This is one of the best story have read so far keep up the good work. i hope to see more chapters. it is amazing i recommend it for people to read it. i like how detail the book is so far
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The story was great, the people's in the story and the background is good but do take note that some of your writing is a little off, but the rest is good.
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nice work author..... l really like ur writting skill as well.. and the story is very interesting... plzzz keep uploading more so that l can read more....all the very best and do upload more... l can't wait to read what the story....
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I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!I loved the book very much, it is well developed, but it can always and always get better, now it's up to the author ... I hope people like it, I liked it!
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I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? I'll be honest, I had to read this novel multiple times to really get the gist of everything. I'll start off by saying that the writing there was very good, there's emotion, imagery and the scenes as well as interactions between characters are shown nicely. No info dumps whatsoever, thus making the reading experience engaging. Now, while I do understand that the author stated that this is a slow burn novel, I was quite lost as the first few chapters. There were things going on, they were being told to me, but I'm still trying to figure what does Deus really want in the end, because his goals seem extremely vague for me at the moment. The remaining chapters up until the recent chapter felt much more clear in terms of direction. Also, why are there two tags to this story? modern and medieval? because I barely see any detail containing any one of the tags, and more information would be nice. Also, I haven't really seen the sci fi aspects stand out. In short, the writing itself is good, but I believe the world building and story direction can be better.
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"Ouch! That hurt ya bastard!" I said as I slap his arm repeatedly, while he's laughing like a maniac. "No seriously what happened to your leg?" I grab his leg then stare at the purple thing on his leg. He sigh and attempt to pull me towards to him, I didn't move as he just move himself to me and kiss my forehead while I just chuckle because of his childishness.
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Moreover, the Baron would provide whatever resources that he needed. Fund wasn't a problem. If it was for his children's education, the Baron was never frugal.
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"Grandma,...I do have to tell you something but please trust me and what I am going to tell you please keep it between us"

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