Dropped a vote here 'cause it's a very amazing story! Love it. Very unique and interesting... I love God, too. You need references in the bible to strengthen the key points of your story!
I like this novel so much.. The plot is not over-stretch and the translation described and explained the condition very well especially for non chinese speaker like me.. The dialogue is funny and catchy..
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author has a good command of language, a few grammatical errors but of course it is a new novel and will be edited. An interesting plot of cultivation that has a lot of potential to become one of the greatest on this site. the characters, and their backgrounds are well thought out, and definitely will keep a reader intrigued. best of luck to the author, keep writing
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What a wonderful little novel.
Please read my review if you have the time.
It is translated excellently (“swordsmen of eradication/termination” is about the coolest name translated from Chinese I’ve seen on Quidan). I’ve only read until chapter 32 and I’ve already read enough to write a sincere review. If you are picky about what you read, please browse through this review, as it will probably help you decide.
[TLDR]: The novel has depth of character, an intriguing world background, and portrays the moral ambiguity of its human-like characters. The translation, up to the latest chapter I’ve read, is at the level of native English, which is much better than other novels on this site/app. Plus, wits over brawn always wins the day for readers like me.
[HIGHLIGHTS]: The characters do not follow some shallow sense of justice, and act like real human beings. That means they will be dark, selfish, and exploit people whilst also showing kindness and loyalty towards others, etc. Reminds me strongly of the characters in Trafford’s Trading Club (ppl who initially seem like trash but are in fact acting for the sake of others, etc)
The world, up to the latest chapter I’ve read, is intriguing and has unconventional aspects such as mystics and decently complicated political warfare. This world has unique elements, much like the world in Throne of Magical Arcana (music + church vs magicians/scientists).
The main character is a perceptive planner/schemer/diplomat type. Reincarnation is tricky and does not make him OP. He works hard in a harsh world and should be considered a generally mature person.
This novel is one of the best translated on Quidan. Thank you very much for your hard work! What would we readers be doing without you guys..?
[RECOMMENDATIONS]: Again, if you find that this novel suits your tastes I recommend you check out these titles on Quidan:
- Throne of Magical Arcana
- Trafford’s Trading Club
They are somewhat alike to Kingdom’s Bloodline in terms of the amount of thinking expected of the reader, multifaceted human characters, and creatively unconventional world building. If you are a particular type of reader, you will likely enjoy all 3 to varying degrees.
NOTE: To those rating 1 star because you are angry about spirit stones... if you truly like these novels... nobody is forcing you to read on Quidan you know..? (^-^)!
Thank you for reading my review. I put a lot of time into writing it because I think sharing this novel with others is worth the time expended.
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Gerei is annoying as hell with his secrets that are pointless also the novel is great read it
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Devil rise is a great web novel, with a devil as an mc from a noble clan at the start the mc is a brat for around 50 chapters but then his personality starts to improve.
the mc also has a system but it’s not that overpowered it shows his stats and other things but does not improve his level or gives him items so far.
Knee jerk review as of chapter 10. I'm all about the beginning few chapters of being high importance as that's what makes me keep reading. So spoilers are here but only up to chap 10.
It's so far The Rising of the Shield Hero but edgier. Generic MC and backstory, the classic bullied by everyone, he's useless, powerless, etc, then gets crazy powers, and a system to boot. The writing can be repetitive and at times is so choppy it becomes tedious to read. World building is glossed over more or less as he "studied in the library" and knows most everything of importance. Level scaling, explanation of magic, just a general sense of what is "strong" to be able to compare to isn't their either in my opinion.
He also levels up insanely quickly as it seems killing single wolves while he's way above their level still garners him a fair amount of exp. Which is also never mentioned or shown, he just levels up instead. So the sense of progression isn't there and it begs the question why not just cheese it and power level off of weak beings. Why even need a slave? He says he needs a meat Shield but he seems to be doing fine on his own. Even going out gaining like 3 levels with ease just after he gets the slave and this is while it's recovering.
Overall it's pretty middle of the road, not really doing anything new or interesting. I may pick it up time to time to see if it gets better or maybe skip a few chapters ahead and deal with the lost information. Like I said the beginning is the most important to me as it sets all my expectations for the whole book and right now I'm just kinda "eh"
You gave the mc the greatest background but guess what, you couldn't make him act like a ruler at all, he gets excited about an earth skill even when he was transported into a lower world. I don't know which cultivation method he uses, his prowess or any special skills. He has nothing, he just somehow became strong enough to beat some random fat dude. Then comes the grammar, it is disgusting, I would've understood if there were minor mistakes like some missing letters but, wow, can you not even use capital letters when starting a sentence or writing a name? The plural of any word in the novel is "word's" instead of "words". Huge mistakes that don't allow me to enjoy this novel.The plot is nothing new but it can be amazing... you couldn't make it so. The world backround is just you stating that there are 5 kingdons, that's all. I can't give you more than 1 star for writing quality and world backround; 3 stars for story development and character desing(which don't deserve even this much).I think you should rewrite this novel, correct your gramatical mistakes and remake the mc's personality. Good luck~
System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. ?