Updating stability is very good. the female lead is very strong and one can easily see that powerful couple actually because both are fighting head on. no of them back of but unknowingly they are loving each other as well... its a really nice and unique book.
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Honestly love it so far, only five chapters in and the writing quality is insane just hope it doesn’t go premium too early. Keep it up, author has all my support
This right here is the kind of novel your read and would want to be adapted to an anime lovely novel nothing nagetaive to write about it
overall the book is really good and i like it a lot. i hope you keep writing and updating it I hope to read more in the future.
The author completely forgot about the first pet .................................................................................................................................................
Author San please continue the Apocalypse one , it was a good one . Please, continue that one and your new novel is good too, Good work , keep it up.
Of course, I will give 5 stars for my own novel i have practiced the Dao of shamelessness after all.
*ahem* if you are looking for an OP MC with beautiful women this is for you.
There will be action and more romance and slice-of-life moments.
This is gonna be wholesome with many 18+ scenes.
Come and read it. At least try the free chapters man!!
If you have any questions drop it below!
I have very high hopes for this novel. I have consistently found the novels with a system like this such as Gourmet of Another World and Gourmet Food Supplier to be very entertaining and a good read. If this novel also hits it off like GOAW and GFS, they will be the holy trifecta of system novels in my opinion. It is too soon to say anything about criticisms so far, but there are many things I am worried about.
A) Introducing the best friend character as a fatty worries me. These novels work best with lots of creativity and not too many cliches following. The fatty best friend is so common that it would be fine to call it a cliche. This could indicate a laziness on the behalf of the author, but as I said, it is too soon to tell.
B) The main character does not seem to have a presence at all. In these novels, the importance lies in the main character and the side characters and world building. However, the main character despite being a person from our world seems to blend in too well and does not differentiate himself well from the surrounding people of the world. GFS has returning side characters and much more people interactions with less world building while GOAW has more world expansion/building, but less meaningful character interaction. It is too soon to tell, but the MC in this novel does not make himself stand out to me in anyway and it takes time to build the world or make side characters a regular part of the novel. So far, no meaningful character interactions have occurred.
C)Would there be any way for this novel to make itself stand out from GOAW or GFS is a big question that I have. If it just follows the paths of GOAW or GFS without differentiating itself, I think it would be a let down of its potential.
TLDR: hyped, but worried about how it will set itself apart from GOAW or GFS.
I give one because he lied... I came for the fluffiness described in summary. Im sick of the revenge cycle of xianxia. Dont read if I dont like and dont post anything if I dont like? Its my right and my will so before anyone rant about why I should pay respect, I don't sell my respect cheap and not freely given. Summary even lied.. Why should I show respect.
So far this is one of the better girl-reincarnation trope novels. It has elements of magic, gaming, and world-building. It has set itself up for success. I will be a follower.....for now.....
great start of novel. good character development. though one thing is that there are some cliche scenes. he says he would mind his business but he still goes out of his way to save others.other than character personality everything is good thanks for the novel.