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I really enjoyed reading this. You know, This novel is different from the existing novels, like a new breath of fresh air. The characters, plot, and even the writing is wonderful.
I don’t know how you guys gave it a 4.8. Have you actually read the story? It’s so confusing. When the mc starts to take the exam for the academy the author decides to backtrack but add a little different in each beginner chapter. Like dude backtrack is usually one paragraph and it’s the exact same thing that happened in the last chapter not a different renovation of what happened next. Also isn’t he supposed to have control over his emotions after he remembers he’s a clone? So why is he acting like he’s 10 when his party is in danger? You probably fi some of these problems in future chapters but it’s the beginning chapters that get people hooked. Not the ending. The clone chapters was awesome no backtracking there awesome.but now backtracking with a different twist is horrible. Probably your first novel.
Nice i love it and very interesting to read. If youre asking if this story was worth it to read yes it is?AHAHAHAHA.?
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I really admire your work author.The story is so intresting and i am eager to find out what happens next.Keep up the good work...Best wishes
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Its very intresting, I only regreat that, I found this book do late.
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Misleading title and genre tags, below average product.The writing quality is average at best - readable but with lots of mistakes.Updates are slow. Story is average at best, but too much Asian cliches of family love and care, too much of mutual respect and bond between high and low status people on the base of ... nothing. Main Character being overpowered is a common trope, but there should be a reason for it - even if a bad one, here is none.Characters are there, but feeling like cardboard target in a shooting range, it's not big deal if they were missing.The world is average compared to other novels, but lack building and explanation - basically - if you have read other MMOrpg novels, you should know it, which is a bad move in my opinion.Won't recommend, unless really bored or just wish to support the author.
AS OF CHP 38Nothing Seems Cringe, Story flows smoothly without logical flaws and disturbing immersion by something stupid. MC and Other Character Personalities are good as it is. The pace of story is superb , without filler and fast paced but not too much fast paced. World-Building is Simple yet Mysterious and things and clans are shown step by step.Wish Well to this Book, this should get more Views.