I am around chapter 64 and i have rarely seen MC pov man like there is only 4/5 pov of mc up untill chap 64 it's tedious and boring but still i am going to see through this poisonous cloud
Yeah but it speeds up towards the end
Nice and Wonderful book, the idea behind the story is great...
The plot is good, and the addition of nice seggs... What more can you ask for!
don't hesitate read and you're in for a great reading experience..
Thank you then
read "Game of Thrones: I became a crown prince for a day" it is simply the best fanfic you will find, I finished it on the English sites just to go after the Chinese ones and the rhythm is very addictive, the changes to the original story are minimal incredible note: it is based on the book series House of the Dragon and the character is someone who died shortly after being born in the original story of the book, which makes this fanfic a very original story despite being a fanfic
So...much....stock market.....
The idea of the story is good with the aura thing but the mc is so stupid. He would trust too easily and even explain or help people even before they became his allies. And he's more of a simp too. Lived more than 40 and his thinking age is that of teens acting all grown up. All the characters here have no depth as of yet, i think the author likes to write simple action-fantasy stories or its a newbie writer. He got good ideas but the way he weaves it into the story plus the carelessness of the characters dont build up much depth in the story. They would believe whatever the mc spouts, even the first girl who became his companion easily followed him just because he teached her not to write her elements in the forms. And then the stupid mc gets a harem just by telling sweet words to an exhausted girl and then all her fellow workers just immediately fell for him. Even the secretary of his business partner fell for him just by praising her and her stupid backstory is that his father never praised her and yet she got satisfied by a praise from a 15 year old? Anyways its still passable but this all that i think is wrong from this story at my current progress of reading aside from the bad english. Its not too bad of an english as it is umeasily understandable yet a proofreader or something could have at least checked on it. - infiniti
I am here after reading secret marriage. But i don't wants to continue after reading 80 chs. It's really not worth it. Looks like author is rushing the story and not even clear about what kind of story line and characters should be, not only that but it's look like she forgot to introduce the characters, some times you have read twice to understand what's going on. Really disappointed
I really love the story.
Interesting MC with lots of potential for growth and revenge! Think a teenage punisher with a system. Looking forward to many more chapters. Author, please don’t drop.
The story is something new and oh man is it funny.
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Thought something else would come hah not today.
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Exciting Story and very Interesting theme of magic and science. Good good good follow up. now free to read, Good luck to your new novel author. Bye. bye.