This book is very nice! I love everything about the book. keep it up...
I really enjoyed this book, I couldn't get enough of this book.
I like the flow of the story
Athena will make a great Luna.
I'm looking forward to this new book!
Why so suddenly you put it completed are you sure that the author of this book will stop it until just hanging in the air?
Loved this book so much and i hope for a part 2 that will end things, i loved every second of it
The writer has a truly unique imagination
This novel isn’t grand or expansive. It doesn’t have a mind-bending plot or deep emotional turmoil, but I still love it. There were times when problems arose, and I’m glad they were able to fix them all. Tongtong was even honest with Shao Ming about everything, including the system. I also love that Tongtong turned out to be the real main character. I’ve read about this kind of scenario before, but I didn’t expect it to happen here. I also didn’t expect that Shao Ming and Xia Yang were step-siblings.
There’s really something about high school danmei stories. They always catch my attention, especially the ones with systems. I won’t ever get tired of this kind of plot. Maybe it’s just me sulking over the fact that I still haven’t experienced high school love, lol.
Edit: I was weirded out by the side couple for the first few parts of their chapters. I actually think it’s good that they distanced themselves from each other for a while before finally getting together once they were both ready. Poor guy, he definitely didn’t deserve to be accused of sleeping for a position. The translator was right when they said the people were crazy for blaming the minor instead of the adult.
This is a gem, a true gem. As you read, it feels like exploring a mine cave; the deeper you dig, the more treasures you uncover. While some plot points are predictable, others are shockingly frustrating. I was left bewildered after finishing the machine-translated version because our little sick villain turns out to have a hidden mission that no one saw coming.
Alright, folks, give it a read—it's really good. I can't say if certain situations will be cringe-worthy for everyone, as that varies from person to person, but the novel kept me calm and thoroughly immersed.
So far, I'm really enjoying it, but I'm only on chapter 18, so I'm still at the very beginning of the story. I'm really excited to see what happens next because the main character did something that other main characters with spaceships wouldn't do, and I think the story has the potential to be quite cute. I hope the translator keeps up with the translation and starts uploading regularly, ideally more than one chapter at a time (◕ldr౪ldr✿)
"Fascinating indeed. A former otaku embarks on a journey as a researcher delving into Earth's secrets, aiming to explore other dimensions. With a twist, they arrive in a world where they become the mightiest species. It would be even better with a romantic element, but despite that, I still wholeheartedly recommend this tale."
First and foremost, this novel is quite generic. There are some clever elements, like transforming waste into a higher quality product, but humor-wise, it falls short compared to other works like "Gamers of the Underworld." The recurring theme of a love interest inaccessible due to societal differences and the reliance on the 'Respawn' mechanic for character growth becomes repetitive after 30+ chapters.
Now, let's address the drawbacks. One major issue is the excessive use of the phrase "hold the grass," which becomes a cringe-worthy cliché. It appears in countless situations, from praising someone's appearance to expressing emotions. This overuse takes away from the immersion.
Additionally, referring to the sect leader as "brother" seems inappropriate given the MC's real-life context. While it might be a term of familiarity in the game, it feels disrespectful for the disciples to address their master that way, even if it's a fictional setting.
Another pet peeve is the decision to establish the sect in a barren wasteland, despite having a system that supposedly provides unlimited resources. The MC's lack of questioning and reliance on the system's guidance feels unrealistic. A more compelling narrative would involve the MC and the system working together to grow and evolve.
The author missed opportunities to develop the story further by having the system guide the MC's actions more actively, providing crucial information and motivating him to learn and adapt. Instead, the system seems to function as a magic solution that conveniently grants powerful abilities without explanation.
In conclusion, while there are some redeeming aspects, the excessive clichés and underdeveloped dynamics between the MC and the system detract from the overall quality of the story. The potential for a deeper exploration of the system's capabilities and its impact on the MC's journey is squandered, leaving readers unsatisfied with the Deus ex machina moments.