This novel was reccomended to me by a friend of mine Murhpy and I must say I have no regrets. The story is great so far though I haven't gotten to the full on yandere quite yet I expect great things. Keep up the great work author.
"How can you say a story is logical?To make your story more logical there are two criteria that you need to meet: Consistency and Coherency. Consistent: Your story must follow its own rules and norms, and it must not contradict itself."
This novel has a good story concept that I will rarely find in webnovels. starting from the characterization of the characters, the depiction of the world, and the development of the story which did not sooner or later make me like this novel. I hope the author is always healthy, and can write this masterpiece until the end.
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It is easy to read, the text block is a little rough, but it does not cause any special complaints. The title page is attractive. The story is fascinating.You can advise those who like to read stories about school and romance.Respect to the author for an interestingly written story!
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I mean, this is the highest review I've given this site so yeah.I really like this story so far, the pacing is rather slow, but it really helps flesh out the world. There are so many stories where stuff is mentioned but never ever expanded upon, but here it all has a nice flow where each thing comes in phases and is never left in the dirt as the plot progresses. The characters are incredibly well written and you seem super connected with the readers and the stuff that you bring in is very realistic for this day and age, like the streaming system.Personally, for improvements I'd like, I'll be honest, I'm a sucker for love interests, so I'd like to see some of that. Another small complaint is the lore of the game. MC was introduced as a lore hunter, yet for most of the story we just have hunting, and grinding and then some plot and back to hunting. Don't get it twisted, as I really enjoy the fights, they feel well thought out, but they stretch on a bit too much sometimes. I'd like to see more interactions between him and the other characters, unless they aren't directly affecting the plot you had in mind, so do whatever. The conversations he has with people about the game or what he thinks of it always get cut short. He talks with Donovan in the car sometimes but there's no dialogue about what he thought about it, we just get a one liner before he's back to doing his stuff. Overall, the story's great. I really enjoy it and I hope to see it hitting the WebNovel charts soon! Thanks for the novel!
I didn't expect to find such an interesting story, awesome character description and interesting adventure story. I really have sympathy for the MC.
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Reverend insanity is my Favorite novel by far.And I love this fanfic since it has a lot of potential.Good luck and thank you for the fanfic
Same old storyline, nothing noteworthy. 1. Transmigration2. Increse in Power3.Revenge4.Mc defeat those who question his power5.Help some female along the way