SpiritImmortalq0g
Hi author thank you for sharing you good story.
loving this already!!!
Thank you thank you...I will go ahead and read the new chapter now?
This is my first time reading an bxb story!!! but wow!!! it’s so great! cant wait to read the rest of the chapters!
Great Read
I love this novel so muchh
I love the book so far, hoping you have quick updates
Let me clarify that while this manga might improve later, its weak start prevents me from continuing. The beginning chapters are quite dull, lacking substantial character growth. The protagonist starts as a boy with dual souls, one Japanese and the other from his own time. Tragically, he's left alone after his father vanishes and mother is killed.
He encounters nobles searching for a princess, saves her, but instead of gratitude, he faces brutal violence. Astonishingly, the king merely demotes the attacker. The MC simply seeks admission to an academy – a reasonable request. It's commendable for him to help, but given his recent near-death experience, one would expect more from the king. Instead of expressing gratitude or justice, the king remains indifferent and inquires about the MC's wish.
The main issue lies with the MC's lack of assertiveness. He appears passive and submissive, enduring beatings without retaliation. This lack of a strong personality or a desire to hold wrongdoers accountable makes the story stagnant. While there are a few characters who trust him, the narrative needs a darker edge for progression. If the MC were to develop a more sinister attitude towards those who harm him or his loved ones, the story might find its direction.
That's crazy
Well, it is a professional book so it'll be a harder read than webnovels.
It's better to first read some actually good WNs and when you got better at, come back here.
And for those parts that she loses to her instincts: they are written like that so they won't have coherent structure and meaning, all so it can convey her inner turmoil.
Can u tell me the site name please
Man why tf is it 250+chapters? Whole life story till death is being shown or what?
