Would like more Chapters a week ;-( Book Overview: it is not a comedy. Intelligent MC who likes Mecha and wants to be a Powerful Soldier. There are some abilities in this like supper powers, but not as over powered as they are. The characters in the LN don't freak out and want to kill everyone just because someone looked at their girl or farted near them.
I will recommend this novel to everyone out there looking for some good novels in web novel. I saw ppl saying this novel harem trash and how the mc has dinosaurs intelligence(don't know what the **** that means),but I assure you this novel doesn't even show a bit of romance hell mc is still virgin and hasn't touched any girl yet.He is not ur stupid mc who does things without thinking and no characters is overly stupid to make mc seem intelligent.He is rational. There's gonna be alot of plot twist and suspense. And at end of most of chapters ur gonna be like "HELLL YEAHHHHHH" and ofcourse the cliffs u r gonna hate them very much. It's full of mysterious, which is not repetitive at all. I m at 800+chapters right now and I still can't get enough of it. I would say it again this is one of the novel u want to read in web novel which is full of cliche and shit novels. HIGHLYYYYYY RECOMMENDED!!! Btw I m writing this right now cuz I m high after reading the latest chapter and I saw ppl saying shit about this in reviews without actually reading it.
So I finished all of your current chapters. So far, you've correctly estsblished the importance of the game, it's relation to the character, the character's goals and risks. Family interactions and everything seemed fine , so the initial premise set up is all well.Now the issues. Right now it's far too early to determine any plot issues that might stick out. I can't see any problems, aside from some areas with awkward wording, such as "the son of Ren's neighborhood" when introducing Roni. I'd recommend going back and perhaps polishing these areas, but those are fairly minor as it doesn't distract from the pace or the plot. There's also some minor grammar errors just as incorrect tense usage, "Ren never even met Silvia in his entire existence..." and so on. Next would be since you're writing in third person, you really need to describe the MC. early on for readers to build a easier connections. We don't really get an idea of Ren until chapter 5 during his character creation screen, and although it is good that you did so, I personally prefer it to be done early on, especially since you even have Roni, a character that readers are supposed to hate, defined before the MC. I found this to be rather awkward personally. Other than those I can't think of anything else at the moment. I hope your next chapter fleshes out Covenant well though. Be sure to make the world gripping and interesting to explore and follow.
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There are some really interesting symbolic layers in this passage that I think deserve attention. The gardenia scent keeps coming up. When Zhou Guchuan gets in the car, "a refreshing scent filled the air, enveloping the entire car with his presence." And then when they hug: "Almost the moment the woman approached, the scent of gardenia filled his nostrils." Gardenias are interesting because they're associated with both purity and sensuality—they have this heady, almost intoxicating fragrance. It's a scent that demands attention. And Yin Lan's reaction to it—"her pores were being invaded"—suggests that Zhou Guchuan's presence is something she can't resist, even when she's trying to. The horror movie is also symbolic on multiple levels. Yin Lan is literally watching a film about darkness, fear, and hidden dangers while sitting in a dark theater with a man she's trying not to fall for. The ghosts on screen are fake, as Zhou Guchuan points out, but the real fears she's dealing with are internal. And the fact that they're the only two people in the theater—isolated, alone, in the dark—creates a pressure-cooker environment where their relationship has to move forward or break. Then there's the recurring motif of light and darkness. Yin Lan only dares to watch the movie during "daytime scenes" and covers her eyes at night. Zhou Guchuan, meanwhile, is described as standing "against the light" at the airport, looking almost celebrity-like. The mysterious chairman nobody has ever seen represents someone who operates in literal and figurative darkness. And Yin Lan's past life trauma is something she keeps in the shadows, only surfacing when she reminds herself not to get hurt again. The island setting itself is symbolic—a place removed from normal life, where social hierarchies and past identities don't apply. It's a blank slate, which is exactly what both characters need: Yin Lan to figure out if she can trust again, and Zhou Guchuan to show her who he really is without his family's wealth as a crutch.
Loving this story so much ❤️
The plot of this book is so good, I have been hooked since I found it, love it so far
awesome ❤️
Interesting book to read
absolutely amazing love it
very intresting
this book was absolutely fantastic and fun to read.