I really like this Story. Please keep us Updated
In my opinion for author I think it can be improved ( by balancing the cultivation and the romance/harem)
!!!!!! GAY PROPAGANDA!!!!!! Dark fantasy.. Kids enjoy peacefull life and Boys passionate kiss each other ... Author rly tarded bcs he cant even write about dark characters
I really love how everything was with the whole storyIt's really amazing ??It's so perfect, this is exactly what I asked for and that's what I got.
Review around mid 200s:The story was great and quite interesting until sometime after the full reveal of the MC’s OPness. After that, at least in the current arc, the elements of the story seemed diminished, forced, and pointless. It would be fine if the story didn’t focus directly on the MC, but it does. The author tends to drag out events with lots of padding. The MC’s values seem to change on a whim, maybe in reaction to the readers. Grammar: high quality with a couple of mistakes here and there.The author’s notes, meant to drive engagement, break immersion in an annoying way. First, most of us don't want to pay coins for these notes. Second, the author constantly apologizes for his mistakes but refuses to change or correct the problems. Seriously, don’t apologize for it if you're not going to change it. Also, readers aren’t always itching for a fight scene. What’s important is drama, tension, novelty, mystery, promise, and fulfillment. The latest scenes I’ve read sorely lack these elements. Those initial fights, even those ending in one sentence at random, had those aspects. The time outside of the physical fighting had even more of those elements and was, therefore, more enjoyable.Maybe I need to skip ahead to a future arc to get that tension and intrigue back, but I loathe to do so. (Note: Being told about the presence of and structure of arcs directly by the author's notes makes me irritated because it is also immersion-breaking. For readers, arcs are elements meant to be realized in retrospect or not at all.) I would likely recommend this story if it was an abridged version with the padding and author notes removed. The story has many worthy moments.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I really really like this book to the point i started reading it and stayed awake the whole night without realising it.Thank you for such a wonderful book.Please keep on updating regularly till this book is officially completed.
It's not bad I like it I think it's a good read for your tastes and have a lot of free chapters like a fair amount to think if you like the book and add it or not so there's my downgraded review.
From the very beginning, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing.Well done, Author!
10/10 but I'm probably gonna mess up with ATG lore/world lelI recommend that you read the cultivation / nen info so the chapters are easier to understandshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless meshameless me
an interesting book, I most like the main character who is a bit childish and cute.I hope he'll turn into a child again, it would be facenating
20 chapters and I’ already pretty hooked this is a weapons system novel that’s so far really good I hope to see this author stick to this story!Some parts I only read once that might need to be proof read but I’v been Reeding on here all day now so I might be wrong