''Did you ever saw me talking on matters regarding like this?''
I am sorry to disappoint any readers, but I will not be continuing with this story. I would like to delete this all together and just start anew. Which is what I plan to do. I have been having a rough time at the moment and I just do not have the motivation to continue writing this story. I sat down and was trying to write a chapter but nothing came to me. So I have decided that I will give up on this story and I will write another one when I have some inspiration again. Thank you to anyone who did read what had been written and apologise to anyone who was reading and waiting for an update. But so I don't leave you with nothing. I will give you a summary of what the novel would have been about and a conclusion.
Of course, this changed as Linley removed his dick and their lovemaking overflowed from her while still trembling down there...
"Isn't her child technically not a Leonhart?"
His heart was beating fast, but it wasn't fear or exhaustion he felt, he was pretty sure.
1. The story does not have a plot.
No longer hiding his facade, Xiao Han spoke to them in a stern manner. Having experienced the destruction of fhis clan in his previous world and countless amounts of spies approach him, he no longer wanted to keep up his false acting and decided to go all out in the case that the 2 people in front of him were enemies.
It's nice Nice story lineI think it's goodIt's just amazing and creative storyDifferent from other storiesItsssssssss veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Excellent! The first chapters blew my mind! A fluid and worth-reading story! A new emerging jewel, I might add! I usually tend to review solely to encourage and help promising authors. But this time is different! This story is just so outstanding! *For Author: I also tried your other novel…However, there’s too much ‘easy’ information given early on, nearly like you’re telling me directly the story's secrets at the beginning. This is really a significant drawback, at least for me— it is almost like you’ve spoiled me early on and purposefully lowered my fun and, thus, the possible mysteriously and curiosity. Curiosity is a strong emotion; try playing with it. While too much mystery can get frustrating, too little becomes less exciting.This novel is also mildly affected by the latter— For example: the father’s loving part is explained too early— too much, and I feel too little, especially when I have yet to understand the character and to get engaged with him. Or just the too many details of the Two possible antagonists. That being said, the story is very smooth and immersive! I love it! So this is just a note for the author to make a study to see if others feel the same and maybe improve. (Also, I think you should stop using both meters and feet simultaneously— it ‘wakes’ me up from this wonderful story for no reason. One of them is more than enough to visualize the scene.)
AS A SANATANI & GAURAV VAINAV DAS I AM RECOMMEND THIS TO KNOW AVATAR OF LORD WRITER PLZZ ALSO ADD 24 AVATRS OF LORD MAHAVISHNU THAT Guru Gobind Singh gives the life account of following Avatars in the composition:[1]Mach AvtarKacch AvtarNar AvtarNarayan AvtarMaha Mohini AvtarBairah AvtarNarasingh AvtarBavan AvtarParasram AvtarBrahma AvtarRudra AvtarJalandhar AvtarBisan (Dattatreya) AvtarBisan AvtarArihant Dev (Rishabh Dev) AvtarManu Raja AvtarDhanantar Vaid AvtarSuraj AvtarChandra AvtarRam AvtarKrishna AvtarNar (Arjuna) AvtarBaudh AvtarNihkalanki (Kalki) Avtar
Alright, this is a proper review now.. although its still a bit shameless but this time I'll provide some insight about this one.first and foremost there will be NO HAREM! although he might be a bit of a playboy but there will be no mutual romance in there.. Though he'll meet his FL after some time!Second, this one of those Lowkey at first and show himself when he strong enough. So expect some long grinding at the start. there will be lots of fight! and lots of adventure. too the MC will be one of the cautious one.. but he's no genius mc that have everything and everyone dancing on the top of his palm.and lastly and also hopefully i can execute it well.. but there will be some twist in here. and it'll be a tough ride ahead .so have fun reading my book!!!
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