am really getting bored,why the updating is so slow? please help us with the update and u know it not good to keep audience waiting please oh??????
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Writing : Overall, the writing is quite good. There are a frequent errors in the sentence structure, but they don't heavily impact the flow of the story. It would be nice to see a larger variety in the verbiage used, but overall it's good.Story Developement : The story developement is better then a majority of novels on this site. It is slightly faster then a normal book, but not as rapid as other novels. Progression is clear, although he doesn't face many challenges up until chapter 50. He also doesn't try to build up his relationships with people, yet it just works out for him.Character Design : The character design is average. It isn't too descriptive, but it gives just enough so you can have a general idea of what a character looks like.Update Stability : No clue.World Background : World background is less thought out then I'd like. We have no clue how many vampires there are, other species, or even if there are various continents. The weather is always the same, and we have no clue what the castle, town, or his room look like. It's the biggest problem with this book.Overall, the story concept and writing is great, the pacing is good, but the world background needs major improvement. Rating : 3.2/5
I like the world building, also, your main character is interesting. He seems funny too. Also I Advocate for anyone who loves to eat to their heart's content. keep it up ??
The story has many to the reader forced moments. If the author has an idea he does it as easy as possible, even breaking established character behaviour. His power ups are correlating to the plot the MC has 40000+ Intelligence, but it doesn't improve his IQ even a bit. The auction house scene was so forced just to progress the plot,that I wished I could have strangled the MC and that he just takes the first random beautiful girl with a similar background as him as his girlfriend was cringe worthy. I'm actually hoping each chapter that she just dies off, which obviously will never happen. The main reason is they both act as 13 year old ***** teenagers even with their tortured past and she is used as a reason to make him soft. I read the story only because I have nothing left at the moment I'd personally rate this story around 2.8, but with many unjustified 5 stars in my opinion. I lowered my rating world from background 3 character design 2 and update stability 5. By the way I think 5 stars total are too much for most stories on this site and the stars are overinflated for liked stories, which is sad because stars lose their meaning this way.
Excellent grammar, fun plot and vivid descriptions. I think this is a very well written novel! If you're thinking of whether or not you wana try and read this book, the answer is GO FOR IT!!
This is a very very good novel ? would highly recommend. However the updates are also very very slow, so I would suggest reading til the latest chapter and reading the rest online, since the update stability is very long and uncertain. I would recommend going on: m a c h i n e - t r a n s l a t i o n . o r g (remove spaces) and continue reading from there. Good luck ? to anyone who tries this novel out!
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