Eve and Ares walked toward the testing site where they see hundreds of people. They have a lot of requirements. First requirement is they must at least unlock aura. Another requirement was age and etc.
"It's quite simple. Place your hands on my shoulder. Then, close your eyes. Focus your heart and will to find Mel." (Jen)
hello guys the translator actually responded to our concerns and gave me reassurance that he is gonna start re-fixing i guess if u could call it. all he needs is time. i will give him a month for the first 25 chapters. i will reread and see if the quality is better. i hope u try it too. if it is not fixed well that sucks.
Duan Ling Tian, 15 years old.
Archer is really immature and a psychopath don't what's wrong with him doing Humpy Dumpy in middle of no where killing dogs nad eating their hearts out. That's some psycholathic tendency my boi... and the way he laughs at every second while talking with girls is really creepy... when he stares at dark elf chest her thought was he was admiring her beauty not seeing it lustfully it's like peeking at your neighboring bench answer sheet and when get caught the examiner thinks he just clearing some doubts. Doesn't make sense right?
Overall nice story. But the MC is too weak despite all the advantage she has
love reading all of the pancakes novels and this one is just as good as all the others.......................................................
Very good story, I like the world of Xiang Bei.
I'm loving this novel! The story and world-building is incredibly great. It has a touch of mystery since the meteor that was clashed at the ruin village that was raid by armed soldiers, that meteor seems to manifest and materialize into one of the victims there. Keep writing! ^_^
This is a great novel that shows a lot of promise. Hopefully the authors don’t screw it up later on. Hopefully this one doesn’t get dropped and I’m actually looking forward to where this I heading.
Gripping even from the beginning. Losing loved ones is never easy, but imagine behind sucked into the future and having the opportunity to find them again! It is so intriguing even though the circumstances surround the situation are dark. Well written and impressive. Excellent work! So far, I highly recommend
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