This story reminds me of a manga about a man replaced his sister to marry a king. I enjoy the plot so far, but maybe you can learn how to write it in more neat and clean style so the reader can enjoy it more ? Are you, by any chance, from Indonesia?
Good read. The world is well thought out and can be related to. Good mc and original story about vrmmo novel. Can't wait for more chapters to n released
Awesome story looking forward to the sequel!!!
setting aside the poor writing grammar, the story is cool and must be continued until it hit the 10000chapter mark. the mc is op(for now) but i guess this is only one of the 'mediocre' world there is. not even chapter 1000 or 2000, mc is already on par with the utmost being/god-like entity in the realm of gods. all in all good story, bad grammar, cool development, mindblowing plot twist, and the way the cannon fodder is being mention with worth 1 chapter is amazing. after that, they will die. keep up the good work! please continue, that and "wired" is actually "weird" :)
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Originally id give the story a 4 star in uploads, but I cant bring myself to knowing the difficulties of reality. This story while it follows some small cliche, has an incredibly authentic feeling. Highly recommended. :)
please more chapters the novel is very good so please post more chapters in the future please. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
So far the story is well written and interesting enough to keep you hooked for more.Hopefully author will push up his release rate a bit ?
another story about D&D wizards from the guy who wrote The Truth of Magici thought he'd learned his lesson because this one has a much stronger setting and starting system, but after ~100 chapters he jumps the shark again and throws out everything to have dumb action scenes where none of his previous powers matter and neither do the side characters
Great story~ read till chapter 92 going to skip to the end of the world or volume….Around Volume 3 is where everything starts sucking or becoming less awsome and things are dragged out and yes other interesting stuff happens but isn’t amazing cool yes interesting sorta but isn’t really awsome….At this point I’m guessing author is trying to get more coins for chapters so is doing a part 1 part 2 part 3 and making many more chapters for each one….. save your coins not worth…. Yeah cool and all but nothing great for plot development or interesting overall main reason I am skipping….. Good job and great novel overall especially for wasting time and to relax…
Pretty dang good. The RL prologue introducing the character and why he ends up playing the game is brief but believable, its refreshing to see neither the lazy cliche "Everyone has enough disposable income to spend every day playing a game" nor filler chapters dedicated to RL just to make the story "realistic".Character developments good so far too, slow in a good way, where we are told an appropriate amount of information about a character for how long the MC has known them (there's no "you saved my life so here's my entire life history and also my unending loyalty). Not to say the MC doesn't quickly form relationships(in a way that fits his character/personality), but so far everything has been progressing naturally. The only criticisms I have are not knowing much about the MC's history, but I'm only on chp 14 so it could still be coming, or it might be more of a gradual reveal, either way I'd like to know just a bit more early on. Also, the world is large, and location names are kinda hard to keep track of. If anyone is thrown by other reviews complaining about the sex, know it isn't really described explicitly(so far I've only seen 1 short instance describing the sex, 95% of the time its "they kissed and went to the bedroom
waiting for more chapters. ..........