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The idea is good and the way it’s going seems quite fun so far..
But the translation is barely adequate. There’s a lot mistakes That clearly indicate at least partial mtl so reading it can be a bit cumbersome. I hope this improves but that seems unlikely..
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its actully good you know but way too many china names[img=recommend] ................................
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author desperately tries to be funny but it goes wrong every time.
MC is just machine that sleeps , nothing else. And this is a blatant copy of another novel .
Haven’t even read it yet but you had me when you said that the mc won’t turn into a murderous cunt for revenge I gotta admit that made me laugh pretty good
This novel would have been a ~4 stars if you actually wrote the novel instead or infringing on someone else translation, possibly leading to a lawsuit for plagiarizing work other than yourself.
To be honest, the novell was well-written, and I enjoyed it, but I stopped at Chapter 73 because it started feeling too similar to "Fourth Prince's Debauchery". It's not that I didn't like "Fourth Prince's Debauchery"; in fact, I enjoyed it a lot despite its poor ratings. I've reread it three or four times because I liked it so much, which makes me feel uneasy about this novell seeming so similar. I even noticed in one chapter where the author forgot to change a character's name and left it as "Akilah," who is the leader of the gang in that other novell. In short, this novella isn't bad; I just felt uncomfortable continuing to read it. (Don't get me wrong, it's not a complete copy; the similarity started only with the introduction of the gang and its storyline, everything else is different.)
I have one thing to say - the update is slow. The rest is awesome.
I have taken my time to read the first few chapters. Here are my thoughts.
1. The genre - it is difficult to impress readers when a genre is proliferated with so many novels with almost the same kind of beginning or story development. However, in this case, the author chose not a human but a non-human. Authonoid. It seemed fascinating.
2. Story - Yes, right from the beginning, as a reader, I felt there was a certain mystery behind the OniGishi...as if she was deliberately tormenting the MC as if they had a certain history together and the MC confirms it a few time himunoidself(!?). So, we embark on a journey to find out what exactly is happening here with the MC!!!
3. Character Design - Oh! The author took his sweet time developing the characters here and it's just the beginning as I read only a few chapters!! The book has so much to offer.
4. World- Yes, the author had excelled in this department. As we read, we feel as if we are seeing some rulers from our world and world politics.
Overall, the novel has so much to offer. As the author took time to develop the story for such a long time, I believe this book will definitely impress you.
A very interesting novel
u guy should please have patience and keep on Reading the article I promise you that you never regret within this novel [img=coins][img=fp][img=recommend]
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Author has a mental illness.
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A very good novel 10/10 Would recommend then again its only the beginning still so the author has a lot of chances to screw up. I don't think this story would fit well with a harem as its a modern world so don't do it.
Amazing story,to the way everything developed really loved it but you didn't really go in to details of the world,but overall everything was great wouldn't change a thing[img=update]
