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violex: Electrifying tale of self discovery! Gripping plot, vivid world building relatable characters.it a very nice novel . I love the writing quality.kudos to the author
everyone must have to read this novel it's idea is owsome and characterisation is really nice ?, interesting ? content in the novel is good ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
After reading so far, I did not find any problems at all. The grammars are and there seems to be no problem at all. The story was also very well written, great job author.
This story is quite nice, and the character was kinda good also i'm hoping that this story would develop even more excited and good story.
Character does illogical things constantly. Plot holes everywhere. Bad dialogue and long winded paragraphs that are enough to make you cringe. Have to constantly fight the urge to skip over content. Characters constantly fall for obvious lies. There is no accountability. If I had any hair left I would pull it out in frustration.
can someone pick this up, this series is really good and i want to see the story progressing
A chilling anthology that plunges readers into a world of undead terror. Each short story in Horrific Shorts: Zombie Edition delivers bone-chilling suspense, grotesque horror, and heart-racing survival. Sir Faraz masterfully explores the nightmare of a world consumed by the walking dead.
You are doing great with the story.... nothing much to say . Just that it feels like mc s not so powerful and I think you should start giving him powers . ...... PLEASE DON'T DROP (as many people with good interesting plot leave the story hanging.)
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I wanted to ask if the grammar gets any better? I’m only on chapter 5 but the grammar is below average. Sentences don’t flow properly.
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Why unfortunately Arthur had a secret from his parents, which he was afraid to tell both of them. His son was changing ... he was remembering one of his past lives. The life of a fallen king.
