seems quite interesting, looking forward to more chapters. all the best author ?
What an amazing and life lesson story, be grateful to God for what you have , so that your blessing will give everlasting happiness and not a short happiness and everlasting sorrow ..
I give this a good rating because I do like monster taming so yeah. And I hope that the story will keep getting batter as the story progresses and do plz get more chapters updated.
A really good book that is out of place in this app due to its portrayal of the Christian faith. It's very wholesome and seems like a modern day parable or Bible story.
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A good story so far with an interesting way of using the system genre. I like the use of the system only giving a basic step into mastering skills and then it is up to the MC to work hard to develop those skills.Not so much of a plot or world building so far but as it is only 6 chapters in you wouldn't expect there to be and hopefully it's a slow build up to learning about the rest of the "universe" instead of the MC learning everything about it in a "chance in counter".Alot that the author can do with this novel and it is just up to him/her to be as creative as he/she likes and take this novel in a direction that will keep the readers entertained.4 stars so far as its only 6 chapters in and the world building, character design and story development is only in its infant stages. Hopefully the story will develop well so it can get up to five stars.
This is great! I enjoy this read. From a reader's pov it has just the right amount of enjoyment to keep someone reading and I hope you continue with what you're doing. I feel you will introduce more entities so I hope you bring the scare out of them. Overall good work.
I think the overall premise is good, but there are just so many POV's and it switches so frequently that it is confusing me. I think POV switching should be highly limited for ease of reading.
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Absolutely amazing. Specially the way the characters are introduced into the story.Literally every single character with a unique personality is forcing me to give this novel power stones.As long as author-san don't mess his setting, I will continue to read and vote with power stone.
You got to edit the whole book so many mistakes the flow of the story have so many unexplained parts and actions that just pop up its a good novel please fix it
Writing quality is in urgent need of an upgrade, if you dont get an editor or something to help with the quality I cant see this story being anything enjoyable to read.