Definitivamente le falta mas sensualidad a la historia y al desarrollo de personajes, pero la novela en general es buena, te hace abrir un poco tu imaginación, me hubiera gustado mas capitulos.
Very nice idea in general; the pace may be quiet slow for some people, but it is therefore more realistic. It really differs from other XianXia stories (in a positive way, if you ask me), since it does not have some overpowered kid as MC and you are not thrown into some miserable romance story after the first chapters.
Though I hardly give 5 stars to novels, I'll gift one today to this book because I had seen no flaws within the simple but firm..."rock-solid" plot that had plunged me into the story nor vocabulary or grammar issues that were misspelled, misused, or non-understandable. Yay! Way to go, author! ✌✔
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Yay me and the writer have similar names and profile .love it. Can there be more updates. How old are you anyway?And even if it’s confusing it’s nice. I love this story and it’s awesome writer!!!
stability cant saycharacters are rather infuriatingcheat is good but not world mood swings of MCdude just can't chillhave read only few chapter till the point where he wastes a powerful question to an experts to prove to some random people in town of his innocence just because he can't wait to take revenge(those servant were not even a threat. Not only did he have much higher talent at the moment ,country policies is to protect talents hence he was pretty safe to begin with wasting this opportunity de valuing himself in front of his backing the academy for level people far below his or atleast with lesser prospect than him)
wonderful read, one if the very best that I have come across. great story, great character. when I say top read I mean of all the books I've read not just web novel. I am a very fast reader and have read hundreds of books in my life and this one is most definitely in the tip top rankings of those reads. for sure a most read for all that come across it.
The only thing I think you could improve the discriptoin it's a bit lacking but the book is amazing ?????????????????????????
The concept is good. But, I get bored over time. MC get new talent, show it to the world, get famous, and go back to daily life, repeat. There's no character development at least until chapter 290~. MC still the same guy who lazy to do anything.Seriously, IDK what to enjoy in this novel. Comedy? just a few of them, Romance? non existence. Slice of life? Not realistic.I'd rather read face slapping cliche novel than this.But, I love the concept. Modern world kinda like rpg, no romance harem.If you have some recommendation like this kind of novel. Please tell meEspecially if there is character development tag on it
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