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Quite I'm loving this book. The story and the character itself is not just good but awesome. Trading something for the needs people want... How I wish that you'll update faster... hehe
Fallout 4 : I must save my daughter and take revenge for my wife/husband ... 5 min later oh a scraps, and an other one and here too.Genius daddy : I must save my daughter and my wife .... 2 min later ohhh a face to slap, and an other one, I really need to slap this face
Do you think this story like what I think? Well, if so I want to know if it true =_=Summary : Once upon a time, life a human that have an affinity with a beast or non human. He loves gold, silver, and shiny antique thingy. So he go around the world with his beast friends to search for treasure and in his adventure he met more beast and some human comrade. And then he became a legend....If its like that, well, just waiting for an update^-^/**. I made a camp here ☆◇☆
Ive been waiting forever for this book dont let other surpass it in votes since its next, ive read the other book with the same premise and i want to compare them and i dont want to it to be next weeks
I don't know what to feel, I thought it was some random trash novel but once I read it... P A I N X H I M I K O WHY DOES IT WORK SO WELL? Good writing, very interesting story development. Please continue the hard work (release new chapter pls..)-Deathho
Very unique story with calm protagonist. Zaos came to new world, which was very different. Magic wasnt very liked, but thanks to his talent for magic he was able to learn it. For some people can be story not so interesting, but this novel focus on character development. ( during reading we follow process of our protagonist) This kind of novel shows us harsh reality and necessary to become strong. Recommended for fans of action and fantasy
The story started great and went on quite well despite having some issues. Towards the latest chapters the story quality has dipped quite sharply. The world building and generally the whole premise of the novel is great and innovative with a fresh breath of air. The only slightly problem that I found is the Shadow Guide. It is an absolute concept inside this novel and a lot of times you will it acting as plot armor , the author forcing situations and as well narrowing the future paths of the plot. Like if someone has a higher rank than you , he can kill you almost anytime he wants (either in an ordeal or in the mirrror universe). The skills that affect your rank or the shadow guide can't be count upon as they are quite common if you are a player.Then we have the characters. They started great , they had their own personalities , problems, strengths. Despite the later down the line the character "development" is quite disappointing. Jake doesn't really improves on the character department. He is still the anti-social , sligtlu proscratinating guy he was. Whenever a girl gets too close to Jake she suddenly gets a stroke and gets removed from the equation for dumb reasons. Also the gang that follows Jake distance themselves from said girls that got the stroke like she is the plague for no fucking reason. For example Amy who was indebted to Jake and saw him as leading figure who pretty much ensured her extended survival , suddenly becomes a fangirl over an earth ex-celebrity who doesn't have any real advantage over Jake at the moment. Moreover before she saw said celebrity guy it was talked how important is to choose your faction as you are pretty much giving your life away to them if you don't have sufficient strength ( we didn't see any noticable talent of hers). Then there is Sarah who had gotten like a lot of attention and development and had evolved from her bitchy , self-centered , cheerleader-like behavior to somewhat more tolerable and smart (which she was) version turn into a brain-dead puppet. She gets close to Jake (like romanticaly) and the author is like trying his hardest to "kill" her off. She does some bad decisions with her bloodlines but nobody from the group is willing to provide the slightest of help and when her bloodlines are acting up everyone behaves like they don't why that happens and distance themselves from her. Even Jake who knows first hand how dealing with said bloodlines could be , does nothing to help Sarah in any possible form or be understanding to why she acts like that. Even his own bloodline which in terms of detriments is a lot tamer can influence his behaviour. He acts oblivious to her advances despite knowing very well her intentions and he is almost like purposefuly teasing her. Now we are in a situation that Sarah is like Amy to the group "dead" as I doubt Ark was gonna ammend their relationship.Lastly after December Ark has pretty much abandoned this novel. He was all about promising about keeping up with late chapters and stuff but in the end he just ended up owing more chapters. We are understanding about his personal matters but you can't promise repeatedly and never deliver. We aren't idiots. Then he anounces that he got another main novel started when he can't even do one chapter/day for his already established novel. Pretty bad work ethics and it seems like he takes us loyal readers as a given (we aren't).Read this on your own discretion.
very good so far. hope it's one of the ones to go past 40 chapters..........................................................................
Story is repetitive, the world is uninteresting, the characters are poorly written and have contradictary characteristics, and the translation quality is subpar at best. What kind of translation doesn't actually translate words like 'laoshi'? It's incredibly annoying. It also has a lot of grammatical errors and odd sentence structuring that makes me think this novel was entirely machine-translated. For example, this is a recurring sentence: "Couldn't be bothered with it, Zhang Xuan [Did something]". That's not in any way grammatically correct. The translators also don't seem to understand what "needles to say" means, as they constantly use it wrongly.In conclusion, this novel is frustrating and boring to read.
I am really enjoying this novel, truth to be told, kudos to the author
sorry to say author I am disappointed at the turn of events the males are behaving as proud as what they have done is not wrong at all none of them have redeem themselves no one is punished as should have been none of them are remorseful
Although I can't relate to Mildred but I can understand what is happening to her. sometimes bad luck attack more bad luck, I can't wait to see what becomes of Molly
