Melondaomaster9nN4
Sigh this mc is really not that smart everyone else is just below average
"Please don't form an opinion solely based on appearance or title; it might seem absurd, but I assure you, it will pleasantly surprise you. The writing is exquisite. The main character's love for his partner is profound. He isn't necessarily extraordinary or overly macho, but his genuine and selfless efforts towards his lover will win your heart."
The story is good from the start but starts spiraling downward when the MC starting to become reasonable. One of the reason that I read this novel because the MC is introduced as sick and psychotic. Also I like it how story progressed with the first FL but too bad after the Hero died and when the second FL the MC suddenly become sober and gentle. Also I have many expectation for the 3rd FL and 4th FL scenes but it did not meet my expectation. I expected to be so extreme but due to change of MC character it become blind. Also, When the 1st FL and 2nd FL starts competing for MC's affection the chapters become redundant. But it is only my opinion. I just want to rant my frustration for the MC character setting change.
Can they add Konoha Hypocrite Darkening System Starts From Naruto?
Good sweet story. Definitely worth the read. Well translated too.
Direct became intermediate master?
That's crazy even MC just became novice when he became master
Why not? I'm mean yeah the mc looking at his mother wierdly, and do some whacky staff sometime, but it has a intresthing power system, no harem, and many benevite if you continue reading this. Well if you curius i read it till the end.
Ps:horible ending don't mind the thing that i say that's all lie, but the novel is really intresting you may say until the academy arc and after that well you may read it if u curius???
Thank you for the updates..hope for updating it daily ???
Cute ,Short story .it’s nice how they don’t want to be honest with their own feelings and how she waited for him and tried to do everything so he can came back. so yeah if you want just to pass time and laugh a little bit maybe this is the one.
I love the plot of the story as well as the characters, it's a good read
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Writing Quality: The author writes the novel in a way where there is enough humor but also not leaving out the action bits which is a pretty good balance and other than that, the writing quality overall is just pretty easy to understand.
Stability of Updates: I'm putting a 3 star since I'm not sure why there aren't any new chapters as of now or if the author has gone into hiatus.
Story Development: The story is really good at showing the progress the MC has been doing and also the side-characters are regularly updated to what the novel is on.
Character Design: I'd say this is probably the best part of this novel as the MC is always progressing however he has problems that arise and once he takes care of that, he grows equivalent to the danger of what he solves. The side-characters have their own quirks and they dont randomly do things out of impulse unless they were really agitated.
World Background: There aren't many plot-holes however personally I think that some parts of the novel definitely need to be more clearly defined. (I'm mainly talking about the demons)
Btw english isn't my first language so sorry if some parts seem weird.
My favorite comedic part so far is them using their genitalia to drive the bone spike
