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I think you should improve your writing, some of your chapter is not that good, and please clarify your story cause sometimes you cant feel the yaoi vibe in their, but over all its okay.I think your good even though english is not your first langauge.Continue writing stories.
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The story is been amazing thus the rating. Sadly, it got locked behind premium. I used spirit stones to keep unlocking for awhile, even to buying some using cash just to continue reading. Furthermore it’s 8 stones instead of 4/ads on other novels. Additionally it’s roughly 15 pages on handphone app, but others goes to 20+ each chapter and doesn’t do this (Be reminded the pages are in handphone app.) But, at the rate this is going I think I will only have to buy more and more. Thus I’m sorry and am going to let this go. Behind 30+ locked chapters and counting. With regards,An extremely disappointed reader.
The story is an action pack, every chapter is as intriguing as the last. Characters are very relatable. If you are up for a little adventure then this story is for you.
For the first 13 chapters, it's really good. it's something I have never seen before, and I really enjoy it.Good job Author
It's a good story overall, but the main character is flat. The mc is only interested in the money and doing as little work as possible. How can you get attached to a character who has no ambitions...?
I like this a lotI’m not some expert writer/reader able to nitpick the books for minor mistakes or anything but I enjoy this
This is semi copy of legendary Mec novel that has been fully translated allready. Read it first if you love it to dead like I did and reread it few times like noob (me). Then read this like fanfic or semi copy and you will love it. If you don't want to read almost same as Legendary mec then skip this and plz stop spamming low review just cos of copy every freaking wuxia in this site is 90% alike and no1 screams they copy each other this is great work I read it almost fully in raws as far as it has come out and its great and it will change later on so its great read if you loved the Legendary mec and reread it like me!!! PS stability is just hope its in trial read so we cant know if it will be Stable after/if it gets chosen!!!
Shame on the translator on stopping the translation!!Shame on the translator on stopping the translation!!Shame on the translator on stopping the translation!!Shame on the translator on stopping the translation!!Shame on the translator on stopping the translation!!
So we are now paying premium stones for wrong and wait for it... duplicate chapters now!? what a way to scam your readers.this should not even been premium with the way its going.. we are wasting stones and the translator has the nerve to upload duplicate chapters today..
At https://***.novelupdates.com/series/descent-of-the-god-of-magic/ 55 chapters have already been translated.You can read the basics of the story there.