Decent story.The pacing was slow and for the start of the novel, I guess that's fine. The grammar and punctuation can be improved. There is potential but it depends on the author. I think the story could be great with an edit- but that's just my opinion. Anyway, good luck with the story.
This is one of the best novel I have read so fair with 80+ free chapters ( including fast pass ) and if you are wondering to read this novel or not then I recommend reading it.But to understand what is going on you have to continue read it tilled chapter 10 or so ( if I remember correctly )so I am not Gonna spoil anything so you have read it ??
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and every ones opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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this is an awesome novel, awesome word settings and background...I feel bad about it having such low collections, idk if author can, but he should re-upload it to gain more readers... It would be a shame if this novel is dropped due to low support.
This novel was really good i got hooked after reading about 25 chapters, the characters were designed nicely and this cultivation world was quite interasting, the story development at the start was good in my opinion it was not too fast nor slow for me but others might feel differently, later it increased a little and was a little fast but reasonable so i found it pleasant, there wore some writing mistakes i saw but i didn't mind since it didn't affect me understanding the story but others might not like it. All around it was very satisfying for me and i hope to see many more chapters in the future since i read all the current 130 chapters
Sounds Cliche.
Op from the start.
Too boring.
You call this Comedy, I call it hilarious Trash.
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The best description I could give this would be a fast-food novel.
It's basically just fighting continuously for several hundred chapters, with little to nothing in-between.
There is not really any harem even though the novel advertises it as such - as it really wouldn't make any difference whether the characters were male or female considering the lack of meaningful dialogue.
Chapters are short, events are quick and to the point and while nothing really stands out, there really aren't any aspects of the story that are unforgivably bad. It isn't exactly a good read, but it's easy on the eyes.
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very good
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Jii, i can't stop reading this.
I hope the author update more.
I never liked such stories. But this one is worth reading.
Impatiently waiting for more update
lovely author❤
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