Pretty good, but next time please make a distinct separator between one person's point of view from another.
This isn't even a case of head-hopping anymore imo.
Also, try to focus on one character/pairing to follow, and sneak in some bits of info abt the others instead of this crowded plot.
Waiting for the next update author ... n ur writing skills r just ... ...
Great work author. Really enjoyed reading this novel. Will there be a sequel. I will miss reading about Aitana and Alessandro.
I love reading books from this author. Please always try to tell your readers when you'll drop new books. I enjoyed this most especially, just like 'Rejected But Unbroken'.
I love this book just wish it wasn't ongoing
wow this book is really interesting,at first when I started reading, it was looking all boring but I said I should just keep on reading and now the book is blowing my mind, like the suspense is just too good, if you're looking for a nice book to read I'll advise you, read this.
Dramatic!!!
Second time reading, still great!
Got to chapter 126. Writing is mostly well done but I don’t like the direction the story is taking. Mainly, I don’t like Owen character and how his forced the female lead’s hand on something and she accepts it despite having been bitterly opposed.
This book was really good. Drama, comedy, and love. It definitely kept me on my toes! I thoroughly enjoyed reading.
for those of you who enjoyed the first part of the book, the sequel is back in the same book with the lives of their children and I bet you will also enjoy it...
I thought this book was pretty good, but it could use some editing and it took so long to get finished that I lost the characters and some of the theme before I got to the end.