One thing I hate about someone who writes fanfic is leaving his work, I hope you're not one of them. for the whole story it's pretty good but it's a shame when I translate it into my language the translation is a bit lacking so please fix it. I hope this story is written to the end.
The setting seems interesting and it has potential but needs serious editing. There are lots of grammar mistakes and unnecessarily long sentences here and there.
Its a good story
But its just recycled story with gatch added
Couldnt make it past chapter 3. Couldnt make it past chapter 3. Couldnt make it past chapter 3. Couldnt make it past chapter 3. Couldnt make it past chapter 3. Couldnt make it past chapter 3.
Bonk is the one true law!
Im glad to see our mc pursue this supreme dao.
Let's watch as he bonks !!!
definitely a gem of a novel, im so glad that this was in my recommendations!!!! reading that back that sounds kinda sarcastic, but i honestly really love this book so far, more than most ive read. definitely deserves top 20 maybe even top 10 once more chapters start stacking up. i hope you stick with this one author, you could really make a career out of this with how talented you are :)
The novel feels pretty original and well translated. I like the plot as well as the progression so far. I Will continue to read as see how it goes.
I really enjoy this novel a lot in fact I picked it up like 3 weeks ago read it all in a week and have been waiting for more chapters I don't mind buying privilege just waiting for more then 6 chapters on the privilege. other then that I like everything about the novel so far that alpha male personality that the MC has is the best for the characters that I like to read about in my opinion atleast
OH...MY...GOD!!! Being a sci-fi reader a heart, I definitely approve of this. It's original, it sucks you in right from the start, and the plot is very well done! Sci-fi/alien/superhero readers, you need to read this!
Winter_Iris.
Your writing always captivate me.
Your writing skills and your ability to draw the readers' attention and capture their hearts is incredible.
You are a great writer. You get better each time you write a new novel.
Your stories , whether light or dark fascinate me.
You have a vivid imagination which you pour into your writing.
Your skills amaze me.
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