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The start is okay but I do strongly dislike when the system kind of has a mind of its own and is rude, for example; In this novel, when the MC gets the system, the system keeps calling him "stupid" or "idiot". Although the MC isn't exactly smart, the system shouldn't have that big of an opinion that it needs to constantly voice how stipid he is and just explain it instead.
Great novel but I feel the plot development is too fast so pls can you slow it down a notch with a little more in depth development and also when he is giving out techniques and weapons (even though it means nothing to him) he shouldn’t give it out casually they should work for it so that they would know the value of it and also the romance is rushed what the hell is there meeting was by fate and then after that you like each other and she becomes your wife.... Generally the novel is great but the plot feels rushed and isn’t going in depth with the development, it would be a lot better if the author takes his time to build the plot and not rush them... also GET WELL SOON AUTHOR
An amazing and captivating story..
This novel as so much potentials but it’s completely wasted. The writing may not be the best but the story’s interesting and same for the MC.
But all these points are all wasted because the novel’s not finish and there a repeting chapter constantly.
I don’t know why the autor stopped but it’s such a shame.
I am very much reminded of .... D.Grayman
Am I alone on this?
Haven’t read yet but the concept alone I’ m giving you 5 stars
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I love the way you write! The story is well-paced, and I like how the scenes are written and described. Especially how you described what the protagonist was feeling along with the well-written dialogue, this is a good read! Keep it up! ^^
continue this one is very nice novel.............…5………5............................... ...............................................................
wheres that one guy that gives us the Chinese name?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????