Absolutely love this book. The romance and plot twists are to die for. can't wait for the story of Asteria, impatiently waiting!
This chapter is a masterclass in pacing. It starts with absolute COMEDY — Wang Ziyu vomiting in a carriage, Chu Yi's face darkening, the whole disastrous journey back. I was laughing out loud at the image of Chu Yi getting splashed with vomit and then coldly ordering "Return to Chu Mansion." The tone is light, almost farcical. Then it transitions into this quiet, domestic scene with Suian eating her cabbage dinner, the charcoal brazier, the chestnuts in the ashes. The pace slows down, becomes almost meditative. We're settling in, getting comfortable with the rhythm of this small courtyard. And then — WHAM. Lin Songluan appears at the gate like a storm cloud. The entire energy shifts. What was a cozy domestic comedy suddenly becomes a social thriller. Every word exchanged between Suian, Ziyu, and Lin Songluan is loaded with subtext. The pace doesn't speed up in terms of action, but the TENSION ramps up dramatically. You can feel the stakes rising with every polite greeting. The chapter ends on this note of Suian covering for Chu Yi, whispering to Ziyu about keeping watch. It's a perfect button — we're left wondering what Ziyu will do with this information, what Chu Yi's real intentions are, and how this web of relationships is going to unravel. The author knows exactly when to accelerate and when to let the reader breathe, and this chapter has both in spades.
The novel, unfortunately, disappoints with a meager plot at 3 out of 5. While I understand the focus on school and slice-of-life themes restricts the inclusion of magical or fantastical elements, I was hoping for a deeper foundation to explore the characters' compelling backstories. However, this novel fails to deliver in that aspect.
The translation quality is subpar at 2 out of 5. There are instances where some context can be inferred, but numerous errors mar the reading experience. Pinyin without proper explanations, a practice that was once frowned upon, is prevalent, leading to confusion. Even when certain expressions are translated, their intended humor or puns get lost due to inadequate handling.
Lastly, the ethics of the situation score a disheartening 1 out of 5. I initially assumed the translation had a similar model to platforms like Suika, requiring proof of purchase, but it turns out it's a paid service without proper licensing. This means the author isn't receiving any compensation, and the translator keeps all the earnings, which raises concerns about fairness and integrity. It's regrettable to see such unscrupulous behavior from the involved parties.
I really appreciated the Naruto arc and the way the author developed Tobimaru's character; it was nearly flawless, aside from the minor inconsistency with the MC's creation being casually left on a desk. Initially, I didn't realize it was a time skip story, so the rapid pace caught me off guard. The time jump was substantial, almost two decades, which might explain the MC's extraordinary abilities. However, the reliance on a time skip for character progression didn't contribute much to world-building. Overall, I enjoyed the read.
It seems the author initially intended to include arcs based on Naruto, Hunter x Hunter, Marvel, Bleach, and Fate, but he wrapped up in Marvel. In a post on Qidian, he mentioned that personal circumstances, like a busy lifestyle, and the book's reception played a role in the decision to stop at Marvel.
Mc reincarnates or transmigrates into a village were s*x is akin to cleaning the yard for money. And the chonkey thic and or old people are not considered sexy so its free real estate for mc
MMORPG : Rebirth of an Alchemist
Thank you about that, I'll try it after finishing the current novel I'm reading.
I need a new update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dao brother please help a poor brother and explain what this book is about
MC is so misogynistic and prideful, even to his sister. What do you mean by you won't accept help from your sister because she's a girl. ?♂️
For those who have come across this light novel or manga, I recommend waiting to read those instead of this web novel. While the current version is rough, there are hidden gems within it. With proper refinement, it holds significant potential. I must confess that I skipped through quite a bit of tedious content.
The Negative Points:
1. Lack of consequences: The author fails to consider cause and effect, resulting in unrealistic actions and reactions. The Divine Punishment arc had numerous issues, such as the main character effortlessly neutralizing God's wrath, with no mention of other affected nations. The arc felt anticlimactic, as no significant deaths occurred, and the punished individuals ended up on a paradise island with the king and his demon lord allies, alongside our protagonist. It's highly implausible.
2. Unexplained summoning: There's no explanation given for the protagonist's unique summoning, and by Volume 16, there's still no clear purpose. We only know that the deity favors him, but no reasons are provided.
3. Predictability: The plot lacks depth, with superficial twists that fail to engage the reader.
4. Overpowered protagonist: The main character is extremely OP, surpassing most similar stories. He has access to Google and detailed maps, making it difficult for criminals or enemies to evade him. By Volume 15, two years have passed, and his abilities are astonishing, like turning someone near death into a child or nearly killing a god with a follower's power. He could potentially mass-produce god-killing weapons or spells, but his ultimate goal is not to kill gods but to become one, which makes his abilities serve mainly to protect his harem and friends.
5. Excessive focus on food: The author seems obsessed with food, with around 30-40% of the story dedicated to it. Descriptions of meals outnumber romance and battles. The constant food-related content becomes overwhelming and forces readers to skip large sections.
6. Pacifism: The protagonist embodies post-war, non-violent Japanese culture, not the traditional samurai spirit. He avoids bloodshed and prefers capturing enemies, leaving punishment to others.
7. Harem issue: The harem is not genuine, as the main character is monogamous and uses prostitutes for his sexual needs. His love is limited to supporting characters, indicating the author's inexperience in crafting romantic or harem narratives, making this aspect a disaster.
The Positive Point:
1. Intriguing concept: The author explores interesting ideas about creating spells through coding, likening the world to a digital system where the protagonist, as an engineer, can manipulate and gain new powers.
I hope this review provides a helpful overview.
While this novel has its merits, it may not cater to everyone's taste. It's not appropriate to label readers as irresponsible or masochistic based on their preferences. Negative feedback serves as a cautionary note for those who might not appreciate this kind of content. Personally, I completed all the volumes, and although the main character's naivety could be frustrating at times, he ultimately confronted his fears and learned to treasure those who truly cared for him. I particularly enjoyed the final installment.