The start of the novel is pretty confusing and a little hard to undersatnd but after a while things seem to become more clear, but that all i can say since there are only 3 chapter and i will come back when there are 20 or more chapter
This story has a lot of potential, hope mc aspires to gain power and immortality
although it will take a lot of time in world building but am feeling it's going to be worth it to follow how the author keeps it interesting in the later chapters , as for now it's fascinatingly enjoyable in reading these chapters .
Good
First of all I adore vampire novels, second I liked the way you introduced the characters, tho I haven’t read the prequel I could still get along and her power of time gap, although I haven’t gone deeper into the chapter I already like the beginning I’ll make another review when I get to the latest chapter
It's fine if the mc is op but he is too stupid I mean who the hell goes around openly telling others about their ultimate skills their number, what they do and all that. I mean ultimate skills are one of the most secret trump cards for strong beings in tensura and he goes around telling other that he has an intelligent speaking skill, infinite magicule breeder, can destroy everything thing and create anything he desirelike he has been acting to dumb on one side he say that he doesn't want to become to strong from the start but openly using his skills without trying to hide them like he wants the world to know that how op he isand also making all his subordinates too strong by just naming them making everyone at least at the level of s class monstersAlso their are some grammatical mistakesfast paced story developmentworld background is good and a really good long story can be written and continuouslyover story is good but needs some character development.
great storytelling and i loved king's game arc no lie. if they keep adding W things like dis then ima stick till da end. aand yea make the story a bit slow cuz the story is moving very quickly
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Love a classic vampires and werewolf novels. It’s an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Chapters are too short though. But highly recommend it.
I like the way the author explains the world building in detail, it makes it easier for me to imagine the story. I also recommend this story for those who like adventure, survival, and also the struggle of the MC from the bottom.
He and his mighty power, split the world into two parts.