Love this kind of stories and the characters were hilarious in the middle of the zombie apocalypse, although I suggest using grammarly to improve the grammar mistakes, and use capitalized letter at the start of a paragraph. Some of it were already good, keep up the good work! and also good luck on the contest!
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The theme was completely immensed into reality,like so much???????????????????????????????????, ??????????????????????
Grammar can be a bit better and the world building can be slowly expanded.There is potential and this novel is pretty good.What is the end goal for this novel? Is it similar to My Father in Law is Lu Bu?
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Until now (for me) this novel is perfect. I´ve read many novels on webnovel and most of them aren´t as well written as this. This novel just seems so unbelievable good thougt through and realistic in terms of the decisions the main character makes and how situations unfold. Thank you for your work author, i think your novel has really great potential! Many greetings
Indeed! Lei, why are you so arrogant?! hehehe I was so carried away with Longwei's emotions. Lei is borderline harsh..ehe, I hope this isn't a spoiler..This a great read guys. Read and you'll see...
Mythical Journey is a very good read. I'll just go through the review categories one by one in my review to show you why. Translation quality- 4 stars. The translation quality is definitely very good, and the team translating this story obviously has a very good grasp on both the English and Chinese languages. Idioms aren't lost through translation, and the idea is usually crystal clear. However, sometimes there are the occasional hiccups such as original Chinese text or a forgotten explanation at the bottom. These are usually fixed, but this drops the perfect 5 star rating down to 4 stars due to the time required to fix. Update Stability- 5 stars. Yes, this is the category most complained about in the reviews. I was promised so and so amount of chapters, but I only got so and so amount. But if you look at the actual times of posting the chapters, it is actually very consistent. They always post one chapter a day, with the occasional bonus due to a holiday or something like that. Now you mention the fact that they promised 13 chapters a week in the menu, but according to the actual release times, they consistently provide 7 a week. You may be angered by this, but I am rating updating stability, not updating expectancy. And as such, they are pretty stable. Story development- 5 stars. This is the category where my bias comes into play. To be frank, I love this story, and I always give my power stones here. I'm sure others would too if they weren't turned off by the negative reviews about updating stability, and thus didn't give this story a chance. But rant aside, let me get into the (spoiler) details of this story. This is a transmigration novel with a focus on a hybridized cultivation using attributes. This is achieved through absorbing energy from antiques of tragedy and cultivating by means of a martial arts style by the white cloud gate. The story progression is logical, and there are little to no loopholes. And I said, I like it. So I implore you to give it a try. Character design- 4 stars. What can I say. The characters are much more intelligent and non-repetitive than a story such as library of heaven's path or martial world (to name a few stories that I like a lot despite common character flaws), but they aren't the best either. In an objective review, I cant place this 5 stars in good conscience, but I can't place it at 3 stars either for the very same reason. Honestly I'd like to put this at 4.4, but there is no option for that. So 4 stars it is. World building- 5 stars. I like this story a lot, and the world it takes place in continues to interest me. Although parts of it are shaded under mystery, I like what I see. It's not ultra great like I shall seal the heavens, but it is above above-average. I would like to put this one at 4.6, but there is no option for that. So five stars it is. And I'm happy to see that ended up working out with the character design, lol.Anyways, just give this novel a try. It's not super light-hearted, and it has very good fighting scenes. It also has a bit of a comical side, so give it a try.
Waiting on the rest of the book. Well be anymore update or can someone tell me where I can find the book other than here
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