Definitely some issues with this novel. The MC's rapid rise to the top of the class and the abysmal romance/drama made it one of the worst fictional experiences I've had. It started going downhill around chapter 200 out of 350, and the last 50 were a painful struggle to finish. The ending was even worse, and I've encountered some truly bad endings in my time. The MC felt detached from humanity, and the connection between their reincarnation and the system's existence lacked interest. The romance was atrocious and unnatural, while the author's portrayal of teachers revealed a lack of understanding. Additionally, the story heavily promotes Chinese propaganda and showcases a simplistic dichotomy between the Dragon Empire (China) and the Western Empire (USA). The latter half was marred by nationalism, forgotten characters, rushed plot points, and an abominable ending. Despite the initial promise, this novel ultimately disappointed me.
The MC reincarnates into a time where he can make everything happen again. He doesn't gain anything unlike MC's from other novels which make use of their past. He makes use of his pretty face to model and to get girls. Throughout the novel, he finds love randomly and there's close to no development when it comes to relationships. MC is way too random when it comes to his personality. The characters are also very vague and only apparent when it comes to being in touch with the MC. The story is bound to be very repetitive as he repeats the process over and over again. Randomly Meets Woman-> Falls in "love" -> They get together-> Woman is then dropped by author.
Wasnt expecting much as im not a huge baseball fan but this story quickly grew on me with great characters and character development. Probably the best novel on the whole site. Keep up the great work.
I was a bit disappointed by this one. The components for a good story were there, but the power dynamics system really let me down. It's stated that 80% of Ability Users awaken strength, 15% awaken speed, and 5% awaken some other random ability ranging from maths genius to ice control. Our main character awakens speed, which is basically a hard check to non-defense types since nobody can keep up with them without special tactics. In theory, 80% of ability users are worthless, which is already kind of lame. Speed users are also unkillable unless trapped or chased down by another Speed-type. Basically, the distribution is all messed up. 15% of users are OP and 5% are moderately OP with everyone else being worthless in theory. I think more variety would have been more enjoyable.That's not the only issue. The other issue is that the author doesn't even adhere to the power system they introduced at the beginning of the story. For some reason when the main character is fighting non-speed types, they are able to keep up with his movements. Now keep in mind, our main character is moving faster than the speed of sound at the point I've reached. It is also explicitly stated that you need special equipment to resist the force generated by sonic booms when moving at these speeds, yet not only are these random non-speed type people moving their bodies at speeds that can threaten the main character in fights, they are doing it without the equipment! If they can really move at that speed, then they would basically have speed-type abilities by default just by cultivating, and you would see every ability user flashing around at the speed of sound, and strength type users would not technically be hard countered by speed users when they are higher ranks. This basically invalidates having strength or speed type abilities so it is also lame. At the end of the day, it's just a big plot hole.Now I suppose it would be fine if I were given some sort of explanation, but I never was, and I was becoming growingly frustrated with the flimsy rules and design of this power system. The other elements of the story were alright, but I was mainly invested in the power system and ultimately had to drop because of the inconsistencies.
This novel is one of a kind. Tittle is perfect
Hi guys. Chapter 26 has been updated. So sorry for the late updates. I was tested positive for Covid and it pretty much slows down my writing within this few months. I'm recuperating in a steady pace and currently writing using my phone so please have just a tad of patience. Thanks:)
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First of all, the cover and blurb are amazing!! I can't wait to dive in.
I truly enjoyed this series. We’ll written and the story line was amazing. I look forward to reading your other books!
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book is amazing and interesting I'm waiting for more