needs a little more polishing but the story is interesting. Would love to read more if you keep releasing new chapters. keep making them and will see. I would to hear more. I am also a writer and I write sports novel called Madtaks: Legends of the Four Corners. Your honest reply would be greatly appreciated! Cheers and God Bless!
I read all the 52 free chapters of this novel in FALOO.COMThis novel is the best Crime Thriller novel to the point where I read. Sadly it's a Harem otherwise I would give it full 5?.
I can see the potential that this novel has. The characters could use a bit of work and more description would be lovely but besides this a lot can be made from the world background. I wish the best to the author.
Very nice ???? And really creative
Loving every bit of this book, more updates please....️
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good. I hope it’s updated really soon.
Great sequel!
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
the book is a great read
it's an amazing book and shika I'm urs biggest biggest fan story is amazing jaise ki maine bathayatha thumara think tank out of the world hai thum hamesha nayi nayi chize try karthi rehthi ho keep the good work buddy all the best on these book i hope it's gets number one in these genre best of luck
Excellent second book by this author. I love Ellie's strong character and how this story moves along. I definitely cried. ? I highly recommend this book!
excellent book - much more than your basic forbidden love type of story