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A must read for me......................
Im trying to read this, but its messy as heck. The numbers rarely make sense in relation to whats happening to the point I’d say the author shouldn’t have done a system. Most writers shouldn’t because its really messy with a lot math involved behind the scenes to make everything work well that most just never do. The way the creatures work don’t make sense, and fights are either too long, or just messy because of grammar to the point I skipped paragraphs. The character is almost none existent outside of standard MC tropes. I mean literally he clears a dungeon by himself, and finds an earing that was part of his old set of gear when he was a top player. Then proceeds to kill creatures in groups despite being lower level with less skills. He is apparently building a combat mage that can do everything. The author warns about the bad grammar, but won’t fix it. Its just lazy I now understand why I got free fast passes for this novel. Please don’t waste your time on this novel.
Wow! I love the book?, haven't read much chapters yet but the book is good.
I’ve really enjoyed this story so far. The idea is creative and unique, plus I’ve been craving a nonhuman story for a while so I gave it a five star. I don’t really have any clear cut criticisms so I’ll just share my thoughts. Thankfully the author has said there would be no harem. I also hope there won’t be romance either since it seems like it would be out of place in a story like this, though I suppose it wouldn’t be completely unwelcome. My biggest concern is that the mc will become physically or mentally more “human”, so I’m praying the author doesn’t go in that direction like so many other stories have. I would like to elaborate on what I mean by “human” but I don’t think I could explain it well in words. I think it might be simpler to say that I hope the mc stays alien to all things human, in both body and mind.
Great going till now... Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!Hope the plans worked... Cannot wait for the next part, please upload it soon!!
ok let's get this straight at first I was hype but then I read the story all that hype came crashing down I've read 12 chaps but from what I can see it's not what author said mans was RUTHLESS and now he gives af about a sickly sister I don't understand you said he always thinks rationally so if he used his brain he would know that he gets nothing from saving that child I understand you want character development but you should have never gave him Avis emotion thats a turn off for me
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This book is ammazzzzzing ??????Can not stop liking itIt interesting and adventurious ❤️❤️❤️❤️So with a big and happy heart I am recommending this book to you allEnjoy ????
Well, hello readers! I'm the author and the biggest critic for myself. I know I'm lacking in many ways therefore I would like to hear from you guys and your criticism over my work.This story is going to be based on different time settings in life of a girl. At times she will miss her chance and other times she will ran out of luck. Timings matter and so does decisiveness.She plans when she was needed to take a step, takes action when she needs to plan - she carries umbrella all the time and forgets it only when it rains. Not everybody is good at making lemonade out of lemons thrown at them. People fumble, they fall! The only thing that can set them apart is their ability to get back and fight. This story takes us to a journey full of overwhelming emotions - betrayal, courage, love, longing, independence.We move forward with the time line of the main character going back in time whenever story demands for a better background understanding.Each volume will be coming up with a new phase in life of our main character, around whom the story revolves.I hope to hear from you guys soon!
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
"The beginning was interesting, but Porto, man? When they started saying that the scout was speaking Portuguese, I immediately thought of Brazil. I've never seen a fic that talks about Brazil, even though it's the country of football, and the leagues they compete in are on par with any other. So many football geniuses have played in the Libertadores for Brazilian clubs—it's incredible. Brazil has had five people considered the best in the world, something no other country has achieved, not to mention the other stars who are playing in top European teams and who are still in Brazil at this time. It would have been interesting to see the MC interacting with the future greats."