send the next chapter bro your taking time
an interesting story that shows both the kindest and cruelest aspects of humanity.
it is a very good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
Good setting and pacing. It's also engaging and unique. Nice few chapters in, so continue updating.
Love it! Just too good Moore. I want mooooooorrreeee!!!!!
Smoothgoing story. Great as a new writter. Love it and hope to see that there is more in the future that don't dissapoint me. good working bro
Good job love it hope it won't be dragged for so long as I am looking forward to the unfolding of the story otherwise am glued like no man's business ????
Now that was refreshing and nice. Good MC and his friends that he is an interesting character to boot. A nice little adventure story with really nice descriptions.
As the story progresses, it becomes more exciting due to the conflicts that arise and the way the MC develops. I would like to see more development of the secondary characters, as I feel they could add a lot more to the story. Up until chapter 6, which I’ve read, it’s looking good.Keep up the great work!
This novel is very creative and I love the writing style. I also love how, as you read it, more information comes to life, which keeps the storyline interesting.
Suddenly the bright moon was casted by the clouds. I felt Anlon's arms around me as I wept. I opened my eyes looking up at him, his handsome face casted with concern and tender kindness.
"What do I want to create? You better prepare the materials for my masterpiece." With a grinning smile Dark said.