Amazing work from the writer here. It's been a long time since I read a story like this and I love it. I love the creativity and everything about the book. Keep it up.
it's an intriguing story, I hope to see this story develop into a great piece of entertainment for all, the only thing I have a minor complaint about is editing the are some misspelled words and missing words but that happens to the best of us??
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Good book but can't read past 30 chapters and I'm a student and can't afford this app's prices. Where can I read?.... ..........
the story is entertaining and you can see the effort of the author, plus you can also see that he wants to promote his culture, but in my opinion, doing this practically shot himself in the foot, greatly reducing the audience, since there are many words that are practically the movement of his martial art and weapons, ranks, that the author puts them with names that as readers we are not used to, since practically when reading several novels, one forgets what that name and movement represented (did I understand myself here?) , and it's annoying. Also, the "MC" wasn't an MMA fighter? Because he practically only uses the martial art of his hometown? Can't he use others as well or try to combine them all like some manga characters do, becoming stronger like that? like garou from one punch man, some characters from kengan asura, and baki from baki.Also, the cultivation system of the mc and possibly the orc race is interesting, but I think it just unnecessarily complicates things when they can easily have a simpler cultivation system like most cultivation novels or Japanese magic novels, and As far as it goes, there is not much development of the mc's story, the creation of the world is good, but very, very slow.I will leave the novel here, it is good, but it bothers too much the names that the author of his culture uses, since one forgets their meanings, and I think that happens to most readers, and they end up abandoning it and only a few read it. read, or maybe it's just me, and that's why I think the author practically shot himself in the foot, although that part could be fixed with editing, using more general names that are understood by most, and in parentheses the author puts as he calls him originally, I think that with that he could have more readers, and the orc farming system, although interesting, is very complicated in my opinion, and could be simpler.martial arts were born out of the need of the weak to defend themselves from the strong, in itself the martial arts are to protect you.Thank you for your attention.
I like this book because it combines a bit of that "DnD" vibe within a modern, "real-life" setting. I also liked how it got straight to action rather than a long, drawn out prologue.
Your writing style is amazing. Your chapters are well detailed and well written. I saw your review. Wow, you're so hard working. Great job! Keep writing!
. .Perfect... but almost abandoned... I do not know if something happened, but there is almost no release.
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The general concept is interesting but to bad it was wasted of this garbage novel.The characters are so annoying in the novel. The story feel like it was written/typed by a 10 year old.